• Member Since 25th Oct, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 5th, 2020

Penbet10


E
Source

Come to a land where wolves and ursas are friends,
Where giants live on clouds and true love solves all,
Into far off lands where dreams and horrors come true,
Grab a chair and and join the tales of Ponyville Storybook.

A series of classic fairy tale redos with ponies for an easy read.
Tags and characters will be added as chapters are submitted.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 5 )

With an angry nope of disbelief he picked up his axe and carefully chopped of a small part of its stomach.

Even when confronted with the scene of a timber wolf having eaten his sister and grandmother, Big Mac still has time to stick to one of his two most favorite words. I love this!:rainbowkiss:

On another note, out of curiosity, what is next? Spike as the hero coming to the aid of a damsel in distress such as Rarity? Or maybe a story with Shining Armor and Cadance?

Wait, I just thought of a few ideas (No one has to follow them to the letter or anything, but maybe they could contribute to the brainstorming process for anyone out there):

1) A MLP version of "Snow White and the Seven Dwarves" in which Cadance is Snow White, Chrysalis is the evil queen, Shining Armor is the prince, and the Mane 6 plus Spike are the seven dwarves.

2) A MLP version of "The Tortoise and the Hare" starring Angel and Tank.

3) A MLP version of "The Little Mermaid" starring Lyra, who falls in love with a human (Though no one gets turned into seafoam). Or alternatively, it could be a story starring Spike, who wants to be a pony in order to be with Rarity.

2204595

i have several ideas but I don't know which to go with first. And thanks for your ideas they are now in consideration. :moustache:

I have to admit this was a good story. But since I have to review it the way authors helping want it.

grammer: 9.5

pros: You have really good grammar,the story felt like an actual fairy tale, also I just like Little Red Riding Hood.

cons: Honestly not much is wrong here. The only mistakes I found were a few choppy sentences.

notes: Well keep up the good work. And please check out my story Dead Rising Case: Equetdemic.

2204832 - Got an idea for another tale: The Pied Piper, starring Pinkie as the piper. Parasprites instead of rats.

Login or register to comment