Chapter IV
"... So we were both right," I said, my agitated pacing coming to a halt. "She may not be biblical, but she's definitely a harbinger."
Adams, leaning back in his chair, had listened in silence to the account of my conversation with Twilight. His brow deeply furrowed, he stared at the bare surface of his kitchen table.
Finally, he spoke. "The Devil has many servants..."
I slammed my palms on the tabletop. "Never mind the Devil! I'm talking about invasion!"
It was the first time in my life I had ever raised my voice to a superior, and I mentally prepared for a reprimand. But Adams remained calm.
"If you are right," he said, "and she is neither infernal nor divine, then she doesn't know what humanity is capable of."
His words, and the realization that followed, drained most of my anger, almost in an instant. "Uh, actually, she might." I took a step back. "Because I... I let her read my books, and... but I don't know how much she knows, and... damn it, I should have known better!" I began pacing again. "Her intelligence is absolutely intimidating. She's not only a faster learner than I've ever met, but possibly the best strategist. It would be easy—she pretends to be our friend, just as the early explorers did when they met the natives. They trade for things we can't get ourselves, and it all seems fine for a while. But then..." I trailed off.
"They're the colonists," Adams said.
"And we're the natives. It might be even worse than that; we're not even the same species, so... God! How could I have been so stupid? She wants me to be a local guide, just like the pioneers had."
Adams looked out the window, at the forest across the bay. "Regulating nature..."
My anxiousness began to reach a fever pitch again. "Weather control... terraforming... She says she wants to make this world like Equestria! No more real wilderness. And no offense, but you haven't exactly given her a good impression of local beliefs. So those might be on the block too, when the time comes. It's happened before."
This prompted an annoyed look from Adams. "When I mentioned the Devil's servants," he said, "I only meant she might be one of those who does his work unknowingly." His eyes strayed toward the bookshelves. "But perhaps if these Equestrians could be reasoned with..."
I shook my head. "They're not an enlightened people. I heard her swearing by Celestia's name. That means the Equestrians worship her, like, like..."
"Like the ancient Egyptians worshiped the Pharaoh."
"Yes!" I said. "That's exactly it! She said Celestia raised the sun—like Pharaohs or Aztec priests. They must think it's a stronger version of their weather-control powers. All their rulers would have to do, is put on a light show when the sun was about to rise. They have no idea how big stars actually are."
Despite the limited space, my pacing accelerated. "If they can alter the weather, lift things with their minds, and move from one world to another, who knows what else they're capable of? There are few things more dangerous than power in the hands of the ignorant. If they're as powerful as I suspect, what chance would humanity stand? When she said she'd bring peace to Earth by force..." I ran one hand down the back of my head, trying to banish the prickling dread. "... She said I'd be crazy to turn her down."
"That sounds like a veiled threat," Adams said.
"It sort of does, now that I think about it. But even if it's not... Even if she has no intent to conquer us... If she goes home and tells her people about Earth, and someone more avaricious than her learns of a world that's ripe for the taking... Damn it, what can we do?"
Adams did not answer. He was looking at a shiny spot on the table. I wondered what he was thinking about. Would he have an answer?
I realized then that the spot had not been there a moment ago. I saw dust particles move through an angled shaft of space that stretched from the table to the window, and realized that spot was where the sun reflected off the table's finish.
I looked out the window. In the sky above, there was a gap in the slate, through which I saw a shade of blue that had not appeared above Cook Point in almost a month. It was tiny, but it would grow.
The year's halcyon days had come.
* * *
My front door closed behind me, and Twilight turned to me from her place at the windowsill, where she had been watching the patch of blue as it edged out the greys that had covered the sky for weeks. I could not remember the last time I had seen someone so happy. She called my name, and practically bounded up to me, snout and tail held high.
"This is it!" she cried with joy. "I mean, I can't leave right now, but when those clouds clear away..." She looked at the blue patch, which had grown still larger. "What a relief! I never want to have to wait on the weather again."
"I guess someday, I'll be one of the last people who remembers doing that," I said. "By the way, I asked Adams if I could show you the engine room. He said yes."
"Oh, right!" She must have forgotten the previous day's request. "Where is he, anyway?"
"Had some urgent messages to send," I said. "Coast Guard business. He asked me not to let you go until he was done. He wants to watch you cast the spell." I smiled and shook my head a bit. "Guess he still thinks you're some kind of angel or something."
"Hey," she said, looking me in the eye. "I'm really grateful for everything you've done. So don't worry anymore—from now on, everything's gonna be just fine."
I turned away, and opened the front door. "Come and see," I said.
A moment later, we stood in the engine room's foyer. I pulled a pair of earmuffs from a rack on the wall.
"We're about to pass through a mostly-soundproof door," I said. "It's loud enough in there to permanently damage your hearing, so you'll have to wear these."
"I don't think they'll fit me," she said. "Here..." Her horn shimmered, and sourceless light appeared within her ears. "Alright, let's see them."
I put the earmuffs on, opened the door, and led her in.
The generators were two identical masses of cylinders, plate metal, bolts, wires, ducts, guages, and more. We alternated their use month-by-month, and now, only the one on the left was running. I led Twilight toward it, and pointed out the guages, and the decals that spelled "DANGER – HOT," as well as the only external moving part: the blunt end of the crankshaft, which stuck out the engine's front, and was protected around the top and sides, but not the front, by a metal shield. As Twilight peered closer at it, I waved her away. If any part of her mane had touched the whirling cylinder, it could have pulled her into it, and destroyed the machinery.
Off to one side, there was a door to a small utility closet. It was unlabeled, and painted the same gunmetal grey as the walls, so hardly anyone, seeing the engine room for the first time, would have given it a second glance. Twilight had not noticed the peephole recently drilled in that door.
Over the engine noises and the sound-dampening spell, she did not hear that door opening, nor the footsteps of the person who emerged. I saw this in my peripheral vision, and tried to focus on pointing out the engine's parts, one by one—stalling for time. But when I glimpsed the figure standing just behind Twilight, with a sledgehammer raised above its head, my treacherous eyes turned and fixed upon it.
Twilight looked up at me, and saw the direction of my gaze. She began to turn around...
* * *
We were about two miles out when Adams stopped the engine. I knelt in the bottom of the boat, gripped the edge of the full burlap sack that lay there, and began to awkwardly drag it to the starboard side.
It had not been quick. His aim thrown off, Adams had dealt a glancing blow with the hammer, and Twilight had fallen to the floor, stunned. Earlier, I had hidden a long knife in the engine room's rag box, and I grabbed it as soon as Twilight's face hit the concrete.
"Alright," I said. "Help me with this." With the chains we had wrapped around her, she was too heavy for me to lift over the boat's side.
"Wait." Adams took the sack into his arms, opened it, and exposed the ruined head. He propped it up with one hand, as if he was holding an infant. He raised his gaze to the heavens, squinting into the light. And he spoke, but not to me.
"Holy Lord, almighty and eternal God, hear our prayers for your servant. Forgive her sins and failings, and grant her a place of contentment, light, and peace..."
I hung my head. I saw the blood and feathers that clung to my jacket—smeared up the middle and along the arms, from when I had dragged Twilight to the boathouse.
"... Let her pass unharmed through the gates of death to dwell with the blessed in light, as you promised to Abraham and his children forever..."
I tore the thing from my back and threw it into the sea. I then leaned over the port side, and dipped my hands in the brine, heedless of the cold.
"... Accept her into your safekeeping, and on the great day of judgement, raise her up with all the righteous to inherit your eternal kingdom. We ask this through Christ our Lord. Amen."
When I withdrew them, there was still red under my fingernails. I tried in vain to scrape it out.
From the starboard came a repugnant gurgle, and when I looked, Twilight was gone, with only a rust-colored disturbance on the water to mark her passing.
A wave of nausea hit me, and I leaned forward, my teeth clenched and my arms around my chest. It passed, but slowly.
"You alright?" Adams said.
"Seasick," I lied.
"Yeah." Adams grimaced and stared into the water. "Me too."
The return journey passed in silence. As we approached the high peninsula of Cook Point, I looked up at the station, and for the first time, felt none of the warmth or pride the sight usually afforded. The empty buildings were tombs, and the light in the tower was a judging eye that glared into my soul.
We tied the boat up at the dock, and began to ascend the long ramp to the station proper. Halfway up, I halted. Adams didn't notice until he was a couple of meters ahead of me. He stopped, and looked back.
"I guess... someone had better mop the engine room," I said, unable to meet his gaze.
"I'll do it," Adams said. "You have a weather report in a few minutes."
"Adams..." I gathered my courage. "What if we were wrong?"
For a long moment, he stared at me, then turned and continued up the ramp.
I followed behind. He reached the top before I did, and froze. Lost in thought, I did not notice this at first, but when I caught up and stood beside him, and looked out upon the concrete landing at the station's centre, I did the same.
I beheld a white horse. It had wings, folded at its sides. There was a single long horn on its forehead. It wore a golden crown.
"Salutations," it said in a woman's voice. "Do not be frightened. I'm looking for my student."
Finis
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Fucked up. Hard.
You done messed up...
Nice knowing you two.
Not what I expected. Not what I wanted.
But...I honestly can't say what I would have done instead. You made me think!
Oh, and don't forget to change the story to "complete"
The end end or just the chapter end.
Well ain't that some shit. Excellent way to end a thoughtful story.
Anyone up for a REALLY short sequel in which Celestia "TRYS" to destroy mankind.
Nice story, it's a shame it's so short, but still a great story
I swear if she's dead....
Not sure what to think about murdering Twilicorn... Or what to expect from Celestia when she finds out.
not good, SOOOOO not good!
"yeah, we killed her thinking that your kind wants to bring hell down on our heads in a religious book, which by the way is completely biased against you"
2232274 Bitch please, P226 will kill her.
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Mission accomplished, then.
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Oops, slipped my mind. Thanks.
Captain! We believed we were past the worst of the storm, but look! The Oshitameter is off the charts!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png
RIP in peace, Twily.
Oh my God, I love this ending!
So, in trying to avert destruction, they just may have brought it?
Oh, so the first meaning that came to mind for this story was right after all?
One thing:
"The End"
Where is the 'complete' tag?
EDIT: NVM, I see you fixed that.
Also... on thinking about it, is this an anti-story story?
To be more precise, a story that was written to point out/think about the dangers of prepackaged narrative?
EDIT: Spoilered. Human psychology is weird.
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NO. RIP stands for "rest in peace", unless you were being clever and trying to imply "rest in pieces in peace".
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I didn't see "the end."
See now, that changes everything. An alien race just killed a citizen of your world out of ignorance. Being, presumably, a primarily benevolent (demi-)god, you would of course listen to the two unfortunate souls as they plead their case.
This is where things get sketchy... I see Celestia as a very empathetic character, as a result of her lifespan. Able to understand any viewpoint presented to her. In my mind, she would understand the crippling fear these two men faced when confronted with what they thought was an invasion. If She were given a very, very detailed account of Christianity, and what these two unfortunate souls believed they were facing... She would still probably punish them in some fantastical way. The only real purpose their confession would serve is how severe of a punishment they would receive, and if that punishment would only be limited to Adam and our protagonist.
I could see Celestia, in the grief of losing her close friend and faithful student, easily deciding that humanity was too dangerous too survive. As a result, she would either exile our realm to isolation somehow, or simply commit
zenocidexenocide by detonating our sun. I could also see her binding our two humans to the lighthouse for eternity. There really is no reasonable stopping place in this situation.Celestia: I'm looking for my student.
Adams: The purple alicorn? You just missed her. She said something about inter- dimensional travel to get back to Equestria and then next thing we know she made this portal that disappeared after she jumped into it. Sorry we couldn't be of more help.
And then Celestia left.
WORLD SAVED
Are you serious? Because this isn't April first yet. You're not serious. You're not serious about this being the end, right? Because this isn't the end.
I did not see a Grimdark tag on this story.
Yeah. That's some fucked up shit there.
EDIT - and watch the downvotes from dissatisfaction roll in...
Ohhhh...they were soooo wrong...and when she finds out, it really will be the end.
I got some pretty mixed feels about that ending
Kinda like how twilights head would be if she got her mane stuck in that machine.
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Oops, forgot to change that to "complete".
No, I had another theme in mind.
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Congratulations on missing the point.
I... was not expecting nor really prepared for that. It certainly made me uncomfortable. Provocative story nevertheless and certainly the first like it I've read. I think I need some D'awwwwww now...
Welp, they're fucked
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*ahem* Rage of two sisters *ahem*...
That was retarded on their part, she said she was a princess of what they think is a powerful imperialist magic wielding civilization that can cross UNIVERSES. So what? "Let's kill her and hope that's the end of it." what the hell...
This story.. doesn't sit right with me. not at all.
Kinda expected something like that. Those dudes fucked up bad, but what they did is understandable on a really terrible, sick level. I mean, they tried to understand her as they would try to understand another human, so they misconstrued her misguided ideas of helping them as something nefarious. And she clearly didn't understand the nature of the people she was talking to.
Might need to read some happy Twilicorn fanfics now, though!
Then adams said : she just left with a spell saying she will go home now .
Crisis averted .
Why the
did they jump to conclusions before ASKING her about the f
ing plan first???
*sigh* Twilight just had to fall in the hands of two yokels without enough brainpower to warn the closest authorities, or at least sending a veiled message to them after she moved on to contact the world, didn't she? And she had to incite them with her wide-eyed, and in this case extremely offensive, ideals.
Then again... nerd librarian, not politician.
Now I can't see a way out of this hole, because shanking Celestia, even if it actually is enough to kill her (and it might as well be), is only going to incite Luna into action. And if they kill her, there's the rest of Equestria to deal with... though without their greatest rulers, the nation would be shaken to no end. Either way, one world just got its death sentence signed.
Very spooky and ominous. I very much liked the story. Well written. ^^
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Then Celestia goes home, can't find Twilight and comes back to gets answers from the two dudes who lied to her and murdered her student.
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Your wish is my command, as long as you don't mind interhorse.
Well
That ended in an unexpected way. o.o
Shame it's over, though. But I guess it's one of those obscure ending type stories.
This isn't a story about ponies. It's a story about people. Short-sighted, flawed people, who make the choice to be evil.
And if they think they can deceive or defeat a powerful, magical being with a millennium or more of experience, they are fools, indeed. One hopes that Celestia will not judge an entire race by the vile actions of two members of that race.
Wow...I didn't see that coming....
Twilight NOOOOOOO What the hell that is so cold
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"Zenocide"
"Zenocide, n.: The act of killing everyone who meditates"
I see this as the best way to close this. It gives a feeling of conclusion while allowing a feeling of continuation as every media should.
Possibly the best way to end something like this. I don't know whether to hate you for killing twilight or love you for the brutal honesty of how a situation like this would have played out, the lack of a sugar rich chaser to wash away the bitterness of such a tragic story is really refreshing. Also I love the idea of Pony colonialists
, kind of give the humans a taste of their own medicine.
Just an idea but it would be cool if there was a "20 years later" type scenario in which you (or somebody else) showed the human/pony war most likely ending with the genocide of the human race (going along with the tragic theme of your fics), although this would ruin the epic cliff hangar ending.
Regardless of which direction you take this ending (anywhere or nowhere), thanks for the intense read
-BB
God fucking damn... NOW YOU'VE GONE AND FUCKED UP!!! Oh, dear... The ending amuses me a lot more than it should. I am incredibly saddened that Twilight was killed, but damn, just Celestia appearing to them made up for it just enough that I don't feel mad at ya xD YOU DONE GOOF'D, SUCKERS!!! XD