*Note: This story is based on the premise that Emotional Intelligence and Intellectual Intelligence balance each other.*
*Do bear with me, I have one proof-reader at the moment, and reading my own work to proofread is fruitless because I know exactly what it's supposed to say, instead of what it does say*
Sky Bolt was just your average colt, teased for being a Blank Flank. Then he went Flight Camp and met a certain cross-eyed Pegasus.
It only blossomed from there, and this is their story.
(Currently on Hiatus as I plan out Act II: Growing Pains)
Chapters (9)
Not bad at all! Things seem to be moving a tad fast, and it seemed a little choppy at points....but well written and an even flow throughout!
I liked it ^_^
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I'm always being told I move fast in my stories. It's a bad habit I need to work out. I'm trying to figure out how to keep things at a reasonable pace, but when your mind goes as fast as Pinkie Pie's...
If you have any ideas on how I could slow it down a bit, I would be much obliged. This idea has come a long way from its original implementation.
D'aww. Just makes me want to hug the both of them.
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I always want to just hug Derpy. In fact, if I was in Equestria, and it's fate lay in my hooves, Derpy would be part of my Elements of Harmony
Cliff hanger? WHYYYYY!!!!!!!
2267234 I love the hay out of cliff hangers ;3 Just makes you want to keep reading!
Funny thing about this story and development process: This story started out as a clopfic, then I realized I couldn't do that to my favorite pony, so I wrote a romance fic that went about 9x faster so far. Then I ended up with this version.
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Can't wait for the next one
when will there be part 2
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I'm going to formulate what's going on in part two entirely before I write it. It's going to be a while, because of all the projects and because this is at a logical break point.
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I know it's sad. There's multiple reasons I wrote it the way I did. Some of them will only become clear if I write the companion story "For the Love of Sky Bolt"
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Nor can I ;3 wait... I'm writing it
Love this story so far. I also noticed the pace of the story was fast at points, but I have those problems too whatever I'm writing.
Soooo......
You still writing this?
PLEASE SAY YES!