• Member Since 1st Mar, 2013
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TrustTheTARDIS


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Twilight Sparkle discovers Rainbow Dash crying. It's not only odd that she should catch her hard core friend shedding tears, but it's the place where she's doing it. Rainbow sits in the charred remains of a cabin in the hills holding nothing but a blanket and a bloodied piece of cloth...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 22 )

I see great promise here . Keep it up , who knows , you might get featured . :moustache:

Pinkie promise more soon. NOW OR I WILL PUT YOU IN MY MLP WAR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

lol I'm kidding about the war story. :twilightsmile: just add more soon.

please CONTINUE

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Thanks! I don't know about being featured, though.

I love it! I love it!:heart::pinkiehappy:

Owlawishes

Owlicious

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Thanks for catching that! :twilightblush: I'll fix it. :coolphoto:

Meh I hate Taylor swift :ajbemused:

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I like the song, but I know how you feel.

“Oh, no too long. It was quite pleasant really.”

Should it be "not" instead of no? Or am I wrong? :derpytongue2:

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Sorry to take so long to get back to you!
Thank you for catching my mistake, I try and fix that. :twilightsheepish:

This was a well-written enough story, and an interesting look into Rainbow's past...
But it's way too short for me to get invested in it at all.

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