• Member Since 17th Sep, 2012
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Divide


Dead as a doornail since 2014

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You and your family have just moved to a town called 'Ponyville' after deciding Canterlot was not the right place. You said goodbye to your friends and your old town.

Now, all you have to do is make friends and continue on living life.

It's a shame that some of them don't want to stay just friends.


Trigger tags:
(Process of being rewritten)
(Second-Person Perspective)
(Anthropomorphic ponies)
(Multiple endings)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 332 )

Nice! I've missed this one. Just feel the nostalgia in the wind... Ha, feels like it's been a year since I've read this (which it technically has been). Heh, now let's begin the countdown to the explosion of hits and views, shall we?

Downvoted fro gits and shiggles. :moustache:

CIA

The return of a good story. Today is gonna be a good, good day.

2195784 Better be best man at your wedding!

Next up is Fluttershy, Applejack, and Rarity. (I think)

YES the sacrifices worked. I knew all those goats and small children weren't wasted.

Red thrush private school?

Fuck. Thumb'd and fave'd.

Why did you post this again? What happened to the original post?

Hell yeah. Now, I can pretend to have been here since the near start.

Spacecowboy
Moderator

Hey, tis me, that asshole. Glad to see you bouncing back, however, did you try going to a mod before re-posting this stuff? Pretty sure that it's rather implicitly stated that such a thing is against the ToS and whatnot.

In the meantime, guess it gets to go sit in my Read Later list again, till it gets back to where it was prior.

Wait, I feel like it wasn't that long ago that you were updating this story. Why are you starting over?
Futhermore, I agree with spacecowboy and am pretty sure that you're not supposed to do this, in spite of how much I enjoyed the story the first go around.

You know...if this were first person or third person I would totally read it.

But man, I just can't wrap my head around second person.

I'll give this a shot though. sounds interesting. And at least it's not clop...

Pssst. hey, authors. I have a secret to tell you, but don't tell anyone.

There are these two writing styles called first and third person, and they're really effective at telling a good story without blatantly cramming everything in your face and telling you what to do and who you are and what you're thinking.

I really think some people should try it out every now and then.

2196168 Brah, no one writes in first or third person, too hard brah, gotta make it easy and use second person brah (at least some stories do it well)
Also, glad to see this is back up, too many good stories disappeared recently, so seeing this (and your other works) return is certainly making things a bit better!

2196189 Yeah, this story flaunts it well, but man is 2nd person being so abused lately.

Time to read this, I missed this one too, but that's why it's here again.

2196199 yeah, it has, that is why my story is only in first person, it may not be good, but I was tired of second person. Once again, this story is an exception to that.

Reuploading stories is kinda against the rules.

2196168
I abused second-person anthro stories before it was cool.

Thought there was already a story like this, oh well now to let the author play catch up to the point he was before
2196034 I agree what happened to the original? :rainbowhuh:

2196288>>2196034
Story got deleted by someone else.

Seems to me that a few people are already starting to get butt-frustrated over this.:ajbemused:

2196240 Considering the original posted story, along with Divide's other stories, were deleted, I think it kinda renders that rule moot.

Personally, I can't wait for Divides 'True' vision for the anthro series. The way it was meant to be.:twilightsmile:

Is this exactly the same, (Like copy paste) or did you actually re-write it by hand (and a few tweaks here and there)? I read the original story, and don't get me wrong it was great, but I don't really want to re-read exactly what I've already read.

2196468
More like few tweaks here and there (No more italicized thoughts, all proper tense, etc.) rather than a huge rewrite. You don't need to read it again.

So let me get this straight....:ajbemused: Some idiot hacker hacked your account and got rid of this for the fun of it for all we know?:twilightangry2: BLASPHEMY!

2196472

Alright, thanks for saving my time. I'm looking forward to the chapters I haven't read! :twilightsmile:

Huzza! I was reading this on FF.net when it just...disappeared. Great to see it back!:pinkiehappy:

And now to wait for Ms. Hotilee to make her fine appearance.

Hmph. Second person is what I'm most used to writing with when I write practice fics on my pastebin. Any other perspective and it turns out a piece of crap. I seem to like second person out of the three main perspectives, anyway. And fer once(Maybe twice, if I count Team Stable 2), a anthro/human fic that ISN'T clop.

2196684 I was going to argue with you until I realized that you where right. It's either sad or disturbing. Can't decide which.

2196710
Wait... I confused myself.(Flutterguy1337 uses Confusion Ray! He confuses himself by accident!)What was either sad or disturbing?

Love it! Although I kinda lost it in certain areas of the story, like when the main character walks down the street with his hands in his pockets? Perhaps i'm just being :derpytongue2: here and missing something. (probably am, I tend to miss things a lot).

Besides my being Derpy here, I love the story and surprisingly immersive! :pinkiehappy:

2196719 'a anthro/human fic that ISN'T clop.' I was going to argue that there were more anthro human fics that aren't clop. Until I realized there actually weren't that many. That make more sense?

2196771
Yeah. I haven't seen any sad anthro fics, though.

Authors Note:
RIDE THAT BANDWAGON.

Bandwagon? Bitch, please!
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2196798 And again you are right! I never noticed that before.

Wow, I love how you mention Red Thrush.:twilightsmile:

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