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I still can't wait for it all to go down. With the monster that Rarity is in here, and how horrible she is, I just can't wait to see her lose everything.
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May Twilight punishes Rarity by turning her into an hideous, repulsive creature like Chrysalis, without the benefit of shapeshifting or disguise, as ugly on the outside as on the inside, forever a leper and unable to trick or harm anyone else with her lies.
Or even better, the Element of Generosity performing a karmic transformation on her former Bearer (because the Elements have a penchant for ironic punishment, like trapping a mad alicorn on her celestial body, or a spirit of Chaos into cold, static stone).
...I love this fic so much.
In the beginning I hated Rarity for her cheating on Applejack. But I thought about it a lot and came to the conclusion, that Rarity being a prim and proper lady always dreamed about her shining knight. And with Shining (heh I'm punny) she wanted to fill a hole in her heart. Something she couldn't achieve until then.
Apple Jack is her honest love. She cares for her and loves her truely. The only problem is she already digged herself in a hole and is digging it even further. She tries to comprehense her childhood fantasy with Shining Amour but isn't completely naiv about it.
She knows the consequences. And fears them.
I'll probably cry when everything blows up and Rarity has to be honest with herself.
It'll probably crush her soul and will hurt Apple Jack even more, considering she lost her family and the things she holds dearest to.
...if this piece ends dramatic.. I'll cry like a river..
and damn.. it's categorized as tragic (DAMMIT)
But still this is a piece of true art
I hate you so much, Rarity. I can't even put it into words.
Well I see the end game working out a couple of ways in order for Rarity to get the Prince.
1. Cadence dies in child birth
2. Rarity murders Cadence and gets away with it.
3. Shining Armor murders Cadence.
4. Cadence is driven to suicide.
i just don't see Cadence having an affair and can't think of how Rarity would be able to fake one.
Goddammit... we keep seeing that Rarity sees herself with a chance to get out, but we know the whole time it doesn't matter. *sighs*
Though... fuck, man, Pinkamina showing up here? Chills. Seriously. You write her in a way that is entirely too... clear, if you know what I mean. *shivers*
I am glad, though, that Cadance wasn't in that cabin. I'd been afraid that was what the letter would say.
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The worst part, Rarity is poisoning the relationship with and between her friends with her cold lies and cruel manipulations. She knows perfectly sooner or latter, the bridge they represent will eventually crumble and colapse, and doesn´t care as long as it sustains her enough to leap toward Shining Armor´s life.
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Well in essence she has already won.
Mentally destroyed
Relationship with AJ and Flutters broken
Useless.
The biggest victim and in denial or Rarity is the best liar ever.
Knows whats up but for some reason not pulling the trigger.
May know more than he is letting on but wants his sister to be happy.
I will be very surprised if this story doesn't end with one of the main characters dead and/or murdered.
I won't be surprised if Rarity 'wins' because the beginning kinda shows her winning based on her own victory conditions.
Fuck friends! I have a Prince.
I can't read this tonight: I will start it in the morning. I am very much looking forward to it. Not you Rarity! You skank! You cause too much trouble!
What if Rarity ended up pregnant from her last time with Shining? She did say she wasn't ready at the time so it's possible that would throw things out the window.
I would be surprised if Cadance doesn't find out someday and/or Twilight confronts Rarity with some truth spell. I can't see a happy ending here. Something WILL go wrong for Rarity, I just know it.
Very nice chapter.
I'm especially looking forward to see the role Pinkie is going to play in this story.
This fic...
I mean, I read it, I can see almost every line of Rarity in advance, and I wish it would be the contrary. That it wouldn't be a lie (well, the ones that ARE lies), and that she would turn over a new leaf. And at the same time, I hope it is that way. Because this is that kind of story.
And I wish it would have a happy ending where Rarity ends with AJ. But it's not that kind of story, right? And for whatever reason, I love it and can't stop reading it.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
This chapter filled my heart with glee! A magnificent, near perfection, balance between pity and anger towards the protagonist... I'm drooling... So many unknowns, so many emotions and I can hardly wait to see whatever comes next!
I hate you so much for writing this so well. A masterpiece of tragedy. I see you setting us up for the elbow from the top rope.
2986432 Cadance dying in birth is a good theory.
Pinkamena! y u so scary??!
I want Rarity to die a horrible death. Shining Armor is right!! She doesn't deserve Applejack!!! I hate to admit it, but it actually looks like Rarity might get her way in the end, and somepony else (most likely Applejack) will get hurt in all this. Or..... hopefully, maybe, just maybe, Shining will have the guts to come out and spill Rarity's little secrets. It would ruin his marriage, and everything, but, rarity seriously deserves this and worse.
It won't end in tragedy for Rarity, she will have everything she wants. Canterlot gossip will separate Cadance and Shining Armour, he will get half the estate and marry Rarity. She will live in a beautiful castle with the prince of her dreams.
Who everypony will know is consistently unfaithful but will hide behind smiles and chatter and other gossip when they speak to Rarity face to face. She will be too astute not to notice but will join in the banter and the laughs as social mores dictate. She will spend her entire life surrounded by fake friends while she hears that four of the elements recover their friendship and a happy relationship finally blooms between Rainbow and Fluttershy.
She will know that somewhere out there, only the Apples know where, lives an orange pony who she truly loves, who elicited feelings and sensations in her that have never been repeated. She knows this pony loves Rarity more than her own happiness and family, that she has forgiven the fights, the infidelity and the loss but cannot forget the constant lies.
Some part of me no longer wants to continue for if I do I will throw my laptop on the ground and not think twice about it. But because it's written so beautifully I have to continue, I have to keep reading like an alcoholic keeps drinking. Please stop making me an addict and end the pain.
Finally got off my lazy ass and read it in one sitting, and I have to say: So Rainbow learns her secret and asks if it's a stallion, after finding a bottle of pills? Rainbow, you astound me sometimes. Rarity's rant to her is scary in character. I wish I could care enough to delve into their minds this deep, you are good.
Damn it Rarity, you have to hurt every-one just for a "prince" who was unfaithful to his wife after two weeks. You don't deserve to know Applejack!
Can I say how much I hate this Canterlot elite crowd? I mean every party my mind wanders to a loud bar in southern Equestria where they mock these damn elitists and laugh at their regalia. I would love to be associated with ponies like Pinkie Pie You said every-one will go through hard times before the end and I don't want to see the tears Pinkie sheds, so bring it on! And with Pinkie's speech, I would love to be associated with ponies like Pinkie Pie Why do I say Purple Smart is 2nd best pone when there's enough Pink to go around?
That fight was good, and 's attitude afterwards. I'm not trying to kiss your ass, I'm just saying. I'm not a sycophantic, stop looking at me like that! So why does Rarity hate Cadance so much again? Because she got what Rarity wants? I hate Rarity, not as much as Prof. Umbridge but more like Bellatrix Lestrange. Why does Tree Kicker have to be such a good pone and fight for Rarity even after all the lies? Do girls like this exist IRL?
It’ll be just the two of us... What are you planning Rarity? I hate her as much as every-one else does, but I still want to see her fantasy in Chap. 3 come true. D'aww You know, just before Shining Armor shows up?
Oh, I forgot something. What was Rainbow doing at Rarity's home?
We're missing something there...First I fully believe Fluttershy when she says she didn't tell Rainbow, she would not risk a crush she might never act on to hurt Rarity without a damn good reason. Some-one tipped her off besides FS or PP, or RD found out herself some other way. She could have gone searching for evidence, and finding a bottle of Morning After pills would give it away but why would she tear up the whole shop? Did she tear up the whole shop in disgust? Did some-one else tear it up before she got there and she found the bottle on the floor not hidden? And why didn't she keep said bottle to show AJ?
Either you goofed up here, I missed something or you're cooking up something big. Bigger than Celestia's ass. And I'm reading that writing guide you put up too.
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Except Shining Armor´s title is only due to his marriage to Cadence. After the truth gets out, it will be difficult for him to make any claim, and is unlikely he can ever become Captain of the Royal Guard again. Not to mention his sister
Sure Rarity could claim to the Regal Sisters her actions, while immoral, didn´t infringe the Law, plus the scandal associated would stain Cadence´s and the Royal Family´s reputation gravely, so it´s better for them to don´t agitate the waters further
Yeah, like a thousand years old demigoddess monarch like Celestia doesn´t have 1000 plus one ways to indirectly ruin the life of a worm like her
Enjoy the grapes, Rarity, they will make an excellent vinegar for you to taste.
The only pony that hasn't been harmed by rarity worth mentioning is
We're you expecting that Twist?
But it's really Twilight. And then her lessons of friendship will fail, she won't become princess, she becomes depressed and dies. Meanwhile, the rest of them all continue to hate each other and they all become psychopathic killers. Except Rarity, because she ends up getting to become the princess she always wanted to be. Except she's dead. And the crown they dressed her in was ironic. And she gets pelted with hatred and rocks daily. And everybody hates her more than the Ponyville Butcher.
That is how I might end this story, taking it from tragedy into a dark gorefic full of hatred, though maintaining a theme of teamwork because of all the ponies that were there to stab, burn, abuse, rape, offend, slap, hurt, harm, and exterminate Rarity. And of course there are those that clap and watch because they are either too lazy or afraid of blood.
Well now, let's take stock of what's happened so far.
A true victim, placing too much faith in Rarity. Got fucked up by Rainbow.
Possibly scarred, emotionally, for life. Friendship with Rarity = gone
Possibly deformed/held back cause of her wing for life. Got fucked up by AJ. Friendship with AJ = gone.
The messenger
Knows what's going on, but keeps the promise (She's gonna crack, I know it.)
"DANCE PUPPETS, DANCE!"
*scrolls back up*
But.... no moar chapters?
EDIT: *Sees comment very similar to this one*
DAMMIT
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That's nothing compared to what's coming next. Near the end of Chapter 7 your eyeballs will explode, and the wait for Chapter 8 will gnaw your insides raw. Guaranteed.
3117676 Yeah, this dude pretty much just summed up everything I was gonna say.
But I need a new chapter! ...even if it means my eyeballs are gonna burn from staring at the screen too much.
Please sir, can I have some more