When Spectra Hue is relocated from her job on the Manehatten Weather Team, she gets move to Ponyville where she will continue her occupation. There, she meet her new boss, Rainbow Dash. Being two similar looking ponies, they question each other. Soon to find out they are cousins and never knew. But with Spectra's deep dark secret, she has been hiding it for years. She decides to reveal her secret to her cousin in trust. Rainbow Dash isn't to happy with Spectra's past life. Therefore some tension grows between the newly reunited cousins.
Chapters (15)
Another long lost relative of Rainbow Dash's, I see. Fun.
Look, no offense, but the whole " Just like Rainbow Dash" thing has been done to death, and giving this green mare the ability to start tornadoes on her own and do SONIC RAINBOOMS: that thing that only Rainbow Dash had ever accomplished before, really makes her seem like an overpowered super-saiyan nobody.
It's just my personal thing, that I don't like when OC characters show up in stories and are just better than the original cast at everything they are supposed to be good at, just for the purpose of showing them up.
The actual writing seems okay to me; it's very simple, to the point and all, which is something that personally I can't live with when writing as I like to add loads of unnecessary words in my stuff, but hey, Hemingway didn't put loads of unnecessary description and look where HE ended up.
Dead. That's where. But also, famous.
Keep at it, even if people say they don't like some things, or any things at all, just keep going and pushing it towards being something so weird and out-there, that nobody can tell you it's not original!
2226713 Thanks for the feedback. I just wanted to say that I really did not think about this being done before, it was an original idea in my head. Plus I didn't mean in any way to have Spectra stand up Dash. Personally, Rainbow Dash is my favorite even more then any OC of mine. She's not better than Dash. They are supposed to be very alike in personality and style. But thank you for the kind feedback.
I don' care if ppl say this is shit! Cuz if it is this shits amazing
(evil laugh heard in the backround)
My brain is full of fuck and it requires PONY
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Haha, thanks. I'm enjoying writing this. So I'm glad people are liking it. Gives me motive to keep going with the story.
Haha! Fourth chapter had 1337 amount of words. Completely on accident- Er, I mean totally on purpose.
Hmm no i feel fine. Try tearjerking and see what i say. Muhahahahahahahaaaaa!
Also good story. What is there not to like about it?
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A number of things, each varying depending on the person with their own opinion.
you can eat dirt cuz Lyra was doin it in another fic when she haf some decolored rainbow>>2247128
Hmm I think Pinkie trowing a party for this fic would be good but..... We need Vinyl Scratch.
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...what the fuck?
1337?
"Its not a what its a who, its a party for Spectra Hue."
Good good but....
I NEEDS TO READ MOAR!!!!!
Ok now I need...
MOAR!!!!!
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I gave you 2 chapters in one day. Haha give me some time to right the next
2302797 Okay.
PINKIE CRAZY!!!
Also the avatar pic that shows Dashie is Adorkable.
The fucks with you and short chapter?!
NEED MOAR!!!
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Short chapter? I make sure all the chapters are at least 1000 words. Lol minus the 2nd chapter.
2325478 Define short. Define long.
*The Troll Question Of The Day*
What is young yet old with words of wisdom?
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I say anything less then 1000 word is short. Otherwise, I don't believe in too long. Plus take an easy, next chapter might be at least double the length. Possibly triple... ;)
(Answer to troll question: Not sure. Tell me.)
2325748 It's Princess Luna.
*Remember she can act childish*
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Ahh... I get it. Lol
2326621 Well that was the *Troll Question Of The Day*.
There will be more soon.
2326621 Damn the pic of Dashie is fucking creepy shit.
(Trying to type words without evil laugh caused by RD Pic for your avatar but failing miserably)
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Success!
2330675 If you heard my laugh you would question your reality.
Good I require MOAR!
Bout time you made a reasonably large chapter but this is still smaller than what I usually read.