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Ponykind has many legends.

They tell of terrifying monsters, fearsome beats, and crippling illnesses. The Mare in the Moon, Daring Do and Ahuizotl... They are all based on realty, though some are more fanciful than others. Ponies everywhere enjoying re-telling them to friends over a mug of cider, or to young fillies too restless to fall asleep. Still, one story is rather taboo in Ponyville. It tells of a sickness that cannot be cured. The reason only brave colts whisper it to each other in dark alleyways is because it is too close to home. The sickness has visited Ponyville before.

The Apple Family is all-too-familiar with this sickness, known too many as the dark plague. Several years ago, many ponies died in a deadly epidemic. The Ponyville chapter of the Apples was very nearly disbanded by the fearsome killer, and it still managed to orphan Big Macintosh and Applejack. Now, old nightmares are rising from the black pits of the past. Applejack, the bearer of Honesty and most dependable pony around, has fallen ill. Though few realize it, she is in very grave danger. No pony magic can cure the dark plague.

Desperate to keep her family together, Apple Bloom and her friends have vanished into the Everfree Forest, to seek the aid of a herbalist. Perhaps the skills of a zebra can save her sister. What they do not know is that there is but one race that can stop the Plague. A race that is only spoken of in legend and myth. A race that has not been seen since Princess Celestia was but a filly...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 32 )

Extreme panic in three... Two... ONE!!!

INTERESTING:pinkiehappy: MAKE MOAR PLZ

awesome chapter is awesome! :pinkiesmile:

>Dark Plague
That has to be most unoriginal name for a plague that anyone can think of without getting ironic or redundant.
Other than that, the story's ok.

Nice to see an update, but did ya have to make thomas a bring :P
It kinda ruins the whole "where are we and what do we do" in a HiE fic.

Figure I better start replying to you guys. :twilightsmile: Thomas is a brony for many reasons. SOMEONE needs to make sure the CMC were cared for. Nick and David aren't the most... stable characters. You'll see their darker sides by the end of this story. I can't tell you another reason I made him one without spoilers.
BTW, i'm planning a little series on this. The plot for this storyline is done, i'm just filling up the gaps. It's the NEXT story i'm excited about. This one, while amazing in itself, is also setting the stage for something bigger. If only I can get it around college work... :ajbemused:

Why in the name of baby Jesus and all his teddybears won't he tell them the situation? What possible harm could it bring?

2328013 How would YOU react to being stuck inside a cartoon world?

2329058 my reaction is stages
1. where the hell am i?
2. HOLY SHIT LIVING WOOD WOLVES
3. this clearly isn't earth
4. ...equestria? that is what this place is?
5. you saying they have magic? chance they can send us back?
6. well, in any fucking case. a talking pony civilization damn sure beats this forest life and if i treat their young nicely they can put in a good word for me
7. not like there are ANY other options

2330002 All I can say is, you're a lot more stable than my boys are :raritywink:

2330467 well, most people DO call me a collected person

talk, talk, bullshit, more bullshit, talk:pinkiehappy:

Uh-huh!" A 6"1' Alaskan Native

I hate to say it but you have the symbols wrong for feet and inches mixed up.......unless he really was 1ft 6 in.:applejackunsure:

Things are gonna get pretty interesting when the trio show up on the farm...:pinkiehappy:

Looking forrard to the next chapter!

Despite all the questions raging within the closet Brony's mind

Nope, sorry, and I was looking forward to this too...

Comment posted by ancientdragonduelist deleted Jun 24th, 2013

why can't there be a girl among the guys? why is it always male bronies? there so many hie single bronies in equastria well least this story has a group even if it all guys with a brony and ponies know about humans with horrors stories...

is this story gonna show the good and bad of humanity and pony kind potential? i really hate an ignorant view of are species being shown as only evil and heartless and that no one try to do good side pony can't judge us they have no right! when your species had nothing at all and had to work in a hostile world with no magical gift no one to guild you and teach you in a world and force into some pretty nasty situation you can't really control so there bound to be mistake's. when you think about it a miracle in it self were not dead or paranoid heartless cold survivors today and all those hiccup we did we learn so we don't repeat history so we can't be emotionless monsters i swear we give are self so little credit that it show in these stories to much now side aren't ponies just as bad if they want to be?

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There won't be a girl here for a while. Still, one might make an appearance in a later story. Girls are hard to write. :pinkiecrazy:

One of the mane themes in this story will be that life changes you. (or something to the effect) Ponies live in a very peaceful world, and that's great. Yet without their magic, they would helpless against the monsters of the Everfree, or even their neighbors the griffons. How did they conquer these terrifying beasts and restrain them to a certain forest? How did Celestia and Luna grow up? What did they do before Discord rose to power? What did Celestia do to solidify and grow her kingdom while Luna was banished? That's only the pony side.

Humans are defiantly a harsh race. Yet we have to be. If our ancestors couldn't defend themselves against the predators of old, we would be extinct. We MUST be violent and dangerous if we wish to survive. The only law of Nature is Survival of the Fittest. As of now, we are the only race capable of empathy, the only ones who have the ability to look at the suffering of others and feel for them. We may not use that ability as much as we should, but it's there.

There will be much foreshowing to the finale of this particular story once I finally get the chapter up. I can see exactly what;s going to happen, I just need to get it on paper. If this goes right, it will be the first step in a larger series. Showing how humans react to attack as compared to ponies for one thing, and also pivoted on the deeper magic that runs all of Equestria. I just need to get the stupid filler chapter done!! :raritydespair:

Thanks for reviewing

This story is kind of all over the place. The way you handled the crusaders was.. weird. Also how did Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom know about the symptoms in such detail when like two days ago they didn't know what The Plague was?

The humans are done alright. But I'm starting to smell stereotypical pony treatment coming along. And by that I mean Celestia and Luna knowing about them all along and knowing they are evil in blissful ignorance. I've seen so many HIE stories do this I swear, where Tia and Luna have been wronged by ancient humans. Still I am curious as to what will happen so I faved it. :rainbowwild:

Not to sound like a jerk but I've lived 24 years and have not been violent or dangerous :rainbowwild: So I beg to differ! :pinkiehappy: 3007292

3009774 Hey, we DO live in a very stable society. :) It's when they clash or we are thrown out of our Element (like into Equestria) that things get less nice, to say the least.

I'm not having that much fun writing the Crusaders actually. I love them to death, but I
CAN'T get their personalities down!! Sweetie Belle is obviously an adorable smart klutz, but Scootaloo and Apple Bloom... I just can't figure them out.

It took a while to get where I wanted to go with this story down. And yes, Luna and Tia have encountered humans before. :yay: It's going to be a pivotal conflict later. Ponies might be cowards, but they are also very accepting when they are assured there is no threat. Where would I go with this if someone weren't there to tell them not to trust the humans?

This story should continue! I need moar! MOAR!

I NEED MORE!!!! :flutterrage:
Please give me more to read... please! :derpytongue2:

Nice re-reading of this. I hope you get the time and motivation to continue this little gem. :moustache:

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You just reminded me it existed! 😅

Fairly busy working, but am taking once a month writing classes, and am curious to see if I can keep this going. Thank you!

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I just reminded you? :twilightoops: That's not good :twilightsheepish:, but I understand that free time is often a rare commodity. :moustache:

A good fiction.... such a disappointment it's dead.

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