“When I wake up it’s a nightmare./I scream in fright cause you’re not there./When I see you again,/I’ll know that I’m dreaming,/I’m dreaming about you tonight.” –The Aquabats, ‘In My Dreams!’
Rainbow Dash has been having some weird dreams. While she won't completely admit that she likes Big Macintosh, she knows she needs somepony to talk to. Will she be able to do something about her feelings, or will she just suffer in silence?
Continuation from ”Dead Leaves And The Dirty Ground”.
Chapters (6)
i love it!! update soon. me hates waitin too long
Nice!
2187396 why do I see you In nealry every story I read?
2188411 is every story you read mac/dash , soarin/applejack , and or has an interesting plot line and not a complete mess
Big mac and RD?
Well written?
I am interested...please proceed......
2188473 uh yes, no and yes
Another great story to look forward to.
The grammar is well done and the pacing is steadfast, but you have some errors in a few places, namely:
That part was worded a bit oddly.
Keep an eye out for them and you'll have a great story for everyone to read.
And to the groups it goes.
Keep writing.
2188476
Compared to the majority of fic's I've seen, this person's writing isn't half bad.
2188776 uh what?
2188792
Now I'm confuzzled
Is that not what you meant by your yes/no/yes?
Oh the joys of miscommunication
2188808 look at the comment I replied to, click on the blue name/numbers
2188808
crap my mistake, that was meant for PinkPearl
2188823
I give up.
2188826
And thus the mystery has been solved!
2188717 Thanks for pointing out the error. Fixing it right now.
2189330 Keep an eye out for any possible errors like that. No one likes seeing those pop up after you thought you were writing acceptably well.
Which is why I read all of my chapters twicefold for edits and corrections.
2189468 I would say that I read over it before I uploaded it, but it was late and it must have slipped past me. I apologize. Thanks again.
the chapters are really a bit short and this one seemed like a bit of a filler. not much happened in it at all except a small talk. other than that i look forward to each chapter
Wait wait, wait.... wait, a Big Macintosh X Rainbow Dash fic where AJ will know right away?
The mind boggles.
2192435 That's actually rare, but for good reasons. Tightly knit families are protective of each other, and the last thing you want to do is cross them by hurting one of their feelings.
Please, you're gonna make me squee and now is not the best time for that. Just... keep writing and take my internet. please.
The title is in... *checks Google Translate* Icelandic?
So it ends, well done.
2202603 Yes, it is the title of a song by Sigur Ros. Music plays a role in my writing, and here is no different. It's to help set an atmosphere.
I have to say, this went by quickly.
Hurray!!!
Dash to the max! or Dash to the Mac!
It is a ship story with no kissing?
2209527 Shipping isn't all about kissing! xD
I understand I was just surprised about how you kept it from happening.
2209684 Well, I couldn't see a way to put it in without it looking forced in as a wedge.
True, true...... about a trip kiss scene?
2209735 Even that would seem out of place to me. But, that's just me.
How about a....... push from AJ?
2209775 Nah. Anyway, that wraps it up for this story.
Hmmmm..... thinking about prolonged sequel?
2209798 Maybe. I'll be put on the back burner like sequel to 'Divine Intervention'. I have a few other stories to work on right now.
2209808 Alrighty Mr. Ood.
(Why 'Closer-To-The-Sun)
2209825 You mean why my username as such?
2209830 Correctamundo!
2209841 This song right here.
I can see why.
2209890 It's a personal favorite song, and like all the fan-fics, everything I do is music related.