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Equestria has changed since The Darkest of Days. Since Celestia's Fall.

Dark forces, once held in check, are left to roam free, for those who stood against them are no more. All that remains are Twilight and her friends. But to stop this ancient threat, they must answer the oldest of questions.

What are the Elements of Harmony really? And what do they want with us?

Takes inspiration from and making reference to: Its a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door, by Jetfire, (Jetfire has given me permission to use material from DB), this is the tale of Equestria's near future, with Tolkein high fantasy, Eldritch Evils, and even elements of science fiction included.

Still (mostly) show canon. Until the attack on Celestia in the near future leads everyone in a direction they never saw coming.

Note: Currently not compatible with Besides the Will of Evil, Jetfire's official sequel to Dangerous Business.

I would also like to give a big shout out to my editor, 3theCaptain, who made this all possible. Thanks a million Captain. =) 3theCaptain

Non stylized summary:
Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Shining Armor are all wiped out in a single, massive attack. Over the next few years, three of those four have found a way to contact the world again, only to discover a religion has sprung up around the way they died.
The main story takes place many years after the attack. The young ponies of the show (ie pound cake and pumpkin cake) are just reaching adulthood. Twilight has had to rule alone, and war has broken out as those who would have never dared to attack Celestia and Luna, smell weakness.
The mane six are fractured, the weapon that struck the capitol has left vast areas of the world uninhabitable, and the Elements of Harmony are attempting to communicate with the world, warning everyone that the most ancient threat the world has ever faced has returned. A threat so old, the Elements of Harmony were originally built to fight it.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 17 )

They're not spoilers if one has read the entire narrative....just highly observant about certain significant objects.

Waiting to see more!! I can definitely see the references you've made.

No, I don't agree that it was a 'nervous breakdown'. It was a post-hypnotic suggestion of some kind, most likely malign in nature, given that Shadow is apparently a meat-puppet for Sombra. It is interesting that Pip's reverence and love for Luna broke its hold, though.

As for the Three? I am not convinced they are entirely ponies anymore; certainly their minds must have been changed by their ascension. That means Twilight cannot be entirely sure of their motives as their perceptions and goals may have been subtly altered.

Finally - if Shadow has got mind-control powers, there's no guarantee Pinkie is safe. Discord is so alien that I doubt any pony magic, even Sombra's, could bind him but I'm worried for Pinkie.

you have my favorite, I can't express how awesome this history is

wow, it seems that things are going to get worse before they get better

How is the "Distant Future" the same generation as the current element bearers?

oh crap, poor pumpkin things are going to get bad for her

and good use of the past

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I know right! It is just not her day. Though Pip is approaching trouble of his own... ;-)

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let me guess, a lot of angry mares

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Well that goes without saying!

Yet even with that aside, trouble is at hand....

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well Discord/Chaos is strong in Pip

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Hey dude, in case you missed it, chapter 4 is up.
Peace Out

Well geez, this story definitely isn't getting enough love. Excited to find out what the hell is going on here.

Apple Bloom, the Cake twins, and Silver Spoon too? I sure hope we keep seeing familiar faces!

I do hope this hasn't been abandoned or anything. Continuing to enjoy it, in any case.

Comment posted by MaeceusMan deleted Aug 13th, 2014

I first found this on archiveofourown.org over a year ago. Is this the same version, and will there be an update soon? :hoovescrossed:

7932269 Well maybe not soon as of when you wrote that comment, but the next chapter is out now! Enjoy =)

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