• Member Since 15th Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 21st, 2014

Stormface


Comments ( 18 )

This story has potential, I recommend you stick with story structure and forget about the clop for now. I like where it is going, the story can develops in the conversation. You can even do a flash back of what actually happened in PonyVille with anon and AJ. Keep writing, there's gold there in them hills. :ajsmug:

I like it so far good job dont miss to read my story too

Well if there is or is going to be clop you might want to put the sex tag on it:twilightblush:

2228449 Well fuck me with a rake, thanks.

2228153 Curses, I meant to tag it 'complete'. There won't really be any *actual* stories from this guy, this is just a throwaway for clop one-shots

2230668 Alright fair enough.

Darn it now I'm really interested at what will happen next

needs to have more chapters IMO

2230668 And here I thought was an awesome story to come home to every other day. Oh well it was good while it lasted.

Halfway through i was going:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

not bad shoulda nocked out 20

Water Chip

HOLY FALLOUT REFRENCE Batman!:pinkiegasp:

Aww that's it?:pinkiesad2:

wait this is it?
wat?
damn cliffhangers.

What is the purpose of this story? You spend the whole thing building conflict and tension for a big confrontation and then you do NOTHING with it!

WHAT DO YOU MEAN "COMPLETE"!!??

ITS NOT COMPLETE!!!

YOU WRITE ANOTHER CHAP- "author has been offline for 18 weeks."

...NOO! NOOOOOOO!!!! NNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

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How the fuck is this complete?!?!?! It can't be complete!!!!! GOD DAMMIT!!!!!!

omgggggggggggggggggggg


you LEFT ME HANGING !!!

HOW COULD YOU DEW DIS 2 MEH?!

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