A diorama has been destroyed in Miss Cheerilee's classroom and the evidence makes Sweetie Belle the prime suspect! Scootaloo and Apple Bloom defend their friend and the three decide to investigate the diorama's destruction and clear their good friend's name. With only three days until their time is up, can they find the unicorn responsible for the crime?
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This is an awesome story! MOAR! I'm so putting this on my read later list to keep track and find out whodunnit!
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Awesome to hear! I'm spacing out the chapters and when I place them so people can have enough time to do theories and such. I'll release the next chapter on Thursday. That's when things really heat up.
Spotted a few things that could use correcting.
For one thing, "Ponyville Confidential" was the name of the episode where they worked at the school paper. The paper itself is "The Foal Free Press".
The other thing that stuck out was Silent reminiscing about having been a filly, which is a female term. You should switch that out for 'foal' or 'colt'... unless you had a twist in mind about his childhood.
Hmmm, three days to solve a crime, or the defendant is punished for a crime she didn't commit? PHOENIX SPIKE is on the case!
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Just what I was thinking. Spike needs a Fedora and a trenchcoat.
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Thanks for that. I'll make the corrections. Glad you're enjoying the story
Rumble Tumble, it's that simple
Gotta correct you on one thing here. Carrot is Mr. Cake's name. His unicorn daughter is Pumpkin.
As for the story, this started playing in my head right at the end.
WHAT?!?!?!?!??!? IT WAS DIAMOND TIARA? I can't wait for the final chapter...
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Thanks. Made the correction. Glad to hear that a fellow Ace Attorney fan likes my story. Can't wait till the movie comes stateside.
I had suspected Diamond Tiara from the minute the hairs were found... but gotta say, didn't see that one coming. Nicely played that!
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Thanks. Also, "What a twist!"
Failed the stealth check, passed the bluff check
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Sweetie Belle's a Bard, so she has high charisma.
I'm guessing it was Silent Study.
Wow, whoever this R.T. character is sure means business.
Wowsers!
Noticed a few typos with the names. In the first part of the chapter, Sweetie Belle is misspelled as Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom as Apple Bloom. Correct later in the chapter though