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Ballisticksoldier97


Heya. I'm a Minecraft, Skyrim, Pok�©mon and Pony lover. I don't write stories, I criticize them. If you ever need someone to judge your story, I'm your man.

T

Author's notes: Yes, I have the full authority of the original author to continue this story.
I suggest you read the original before reading this, otherwise it may cause confusion.

Full credit goes to the author, tony1685

First fic. Not mine, but still.
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Equestria and Aquileon, the griffon's realm, have a long-standing agreement: Every five years, teams from each country will face each other in a competition to garner fame and glory for their home and for themselves. This year, the griffons have chosen war games, confident that they can steamroll the peace-loving Equestrians.
Princess Luna, determined to stop this from happening, pulls nine great warriors from their world to help Equestria and to train their representatives. But was this a good idea?

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Comments ( 10 )

Good luck I was following the original I hope you can do it justice... and from what I have seen you can keep up the good work. :)

Ehh... Formatting needs a bit work (indent your paragraphs) and grammar needs polishing.

I liked the original though, so I'll bite.

Indent paragraphs, mate. Keep it up, though. I'll send the links for the pony artwork later. Also, feel free to take the original chapters and add those here. Comments on the wrong story will get frustrating for me.

CIA

Need I even say anything?

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Of course! *faceslap* How could I even forget the indentions?! Fixing now.

This is what I want to see! I loved the original Wargames and was sad to see it cancelled. But you are doing the original justice!

I look forward to seeing more chapters, if you do intend on continuing.

2187411 I'll help edit if you need it. It never hurts to ask for help.

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