The story of Rarity, a PoV Guy John Everyman, and their budding marriage and child raising.
:megusta:
Marshmallows. *Chuckles at an inside joke*I've never seen the erotic appeal to eating, myself.But, you are more literature-based in your writing style than most would be. *Clicks next chapter*
Not one for clop. Not one for foodplay. Not one for preggo-sex.
Yet, I've heard a lot of good things about this story, so I'm prepared to devote some of my life to reading it.
I don't know if I was meant to, but I totally lost my shit at "Spank me. Oh spank me. I’ve been... so naughty. I ate your cake."
~AC
sooooo are they on earth equestia or a componation of the two
Foodplay thats new to me. Marshmallows X3 I bet the majority of rarity fans were giggling when they read that.
this passed slowly from sex to cannibalism.a marshmallow eating marshmallows...
holy fuck how much did she eat right there....
weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/holy-shit-i-found-a-dollar.jpg
Just know, I have a weakness for any humanXpony story. Any. Onwards, to the next chapter!
The flow of this story is really bad...I have trouble keeping up on when events are happening...you need to sequence events more carefully
Rarity eating marshmallows? cannibalism i say!
I liked it it it was awesome and sweet and I'm happy he was able to show her how much he loves her by spicing things up
:megusta:
Marshmallows. *Chuckles at an inside joke*
I've never seen the erotic appeal to eating, myself.
But, you are more literature-based in your writing style than most would be. *Clicks next chapter*
Not one for clop. Not one for foodplay. Not one for preggo-sex.
Yet, I've heard a lot of good things about this story, so I'm prepared to devote some of my life to reading it.
I don't know if I was meant to, but I totally lost my shit at "Spank me. Oh spank me. I’ve been... so naughty. I ate your cake."
~AC
sooooo are they on earth equestia or a componation of the two
Foodplay thats new to me. Marshmallows X3 I bet the majority of rarity fans were giggling when they read that.
this passed slowly from sex to cannibalism.
a marshmallow eating marshmallows...
holy fuck how much did she eat right there....
weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/holy-shit-i-found-a-dollar.jpg
Just know, I have a weakness for any humanXpony story. Any. Onwards, to the next chapter!
The flow of this story is really bad...I have trouble keeping up on when events are happening...you need to sequence events more carefully
Rarity eating marshmallows? cannibalism i say!
I liked it it it was awesome and sweet and I'm happy he was able to show her how much he loves her by spicing things up