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Wages of Sin


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Twilight wakes up after a failed experiment and quickly discovers just what that failure did to her.

Will she be able to function in her new form long enough to find the counter spell, or will she go crazy before she gets the opportunity?

Can she handle being a carnivore in a town of herbivores?

What happens when a pack of Timberwolves comes, driving her to an ultimate decision?

5/11/2014 -Featured!

Chapters (30)
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One of the first stories I read on this site after making my account had the exact same cover pic.
So far this looks as if it will be just as good (if not better). :pinkiehappy:

This intrigues me, have a mustache :moustache:

I shall give it a shot but I already see some misspelling in the description. Perhaps you should seek a editor or pre reader

FUZZY!:pinkiehappy: oh the CHAOS that this'll bring! even Discord might cringe:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

I like it so far and definitely keep up the good work

2189523 O.o Whoa, nice catch. Word's spell check accepts opertunity or opportunity as correct... That's disheartening... But anyway: Fixed!:pinkiehappy:

Hey, Twii. I bet Pinkie would taste delicious. Think how sweet she must be considering her diet.

Well...it's different to the stream of "has secretly been a changeling all along" fics that have sprung up.
You have my interest.

Excellent work, some minor grammar mistakes but I think the ones in the description got called out, excellent work!

Dearest author,

You have here nabbed a remarkable opportunity. This story has great potential, and so far, it has been extremely pleasant to read.

I eagerly await your next chapter. Have a fav, upvote, and a watch.

Please, do not disappoint me.

Well done, sir.

2189887 Yeah, what's with those lately? does anyone know why those are so hot right now? You'd think that seasons 3's finale would be a hotter topic than season 2's right now... :rainbowhuh:

2189914 I think they're all following Irony of Applejack.
Well as far as I know.There could be one that predates that.

2189943 I actually have IoA in my read later, have you read it? how is it?

2189961 It's great,well paced and thought out. Probably one of the best ponyfics I've read.

:pinkiegasp:PUPPY!:pinkiehappy:

faved and watched.

Can't fave fast enough.

Seriously, I want to see where this goes. I know some dogs can handle an omnivorous diet, though. Mine will eat anything. Including what isn't normally declared "food".

this concept has HUGE potential in my eyes!:pinkiehappy:

2190040
I have a Rotweiler/German Mastiff mix that is the EXACT same way. Sticks, leaves, pinecones, rocks... He will eat anything he can fit into his mouth. And not for a lack of food, either.

I have always loved this concept, but I don't think it has been used enough.
The whole "pony turns into an animal like a cat ,dog or bunny and goes about his/her day" is awesome
I wish to see moar please :derpytongue2:

okay after reading the fan fic Dog Days i was wondering when another author would write a Twilight is a wolf or werewolf fic

bravo by the way

I like it! I've seen a story before where all of the mane 6 changed into wolves (without magic) and had to do an epic quest to chang back. But I think I will like this one more. There are enough shenanigans to be found in Ponyville, and it's going to be fun to read all the reactions.

Not quite as cute as Twilight Kitty but pretty darn diabetes inducing in its own fashion... :heart:

2190428 Interesting...

Frankly, I don't want to mention in name what my dog will eat, not here. She's been known to eat stuff horses leave on the road.

Not a bad start, this looks like it'll be fun.

2192301 Brilliant! Twilight can eat as much as she wants out of the Ponyville municipal waste facility! :twilightoops:

2192322 Yep. And perhaps worse.

2192336 Fresh from the source? Is that, dare I ask, how it could be "worse"?

2192354 ... Perhaps. I mean, you're writing it.

2189553

Google Doc's thinks that won't is incorrect and corrects it as wont

2192301
If you gave him the chance, Bizmark would too. :derpytongue2:

2192380 Dear lord! You're taking me seriously? No! I'm not having a comedy go all "the pony centipede"! :pinkiesick:

Pfft! The ending amuses me.

Have a cautious thumbs up. I personally haven't read this particular topic on fimfiction yet. Word of advice though-- "my roommate is a vampire" released short chapters rapidly as they were written, and as hype increased they rapidly decreased in quality. I would sit on a chapter for a day after it's "done," then reread immediately before you submit, even if you have an editor.

I bet Twilight's pretty hot as a vixen....let the madness commence!!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

2193977 I'm sorry if I was unclear when I said I'd post "as inspiration hits". When I said that I meant I would be doing the opposite of what you fear, I meant to appoligize if I go a while without updating. (In a nicer way) While I do expect to be posting rather quickly, I would not sacrifice the quality of my writing for update speed. Sorry for the confusion. And thanks for asking!

I heard the National Geographic theme during the chase scene.

I swear, I have seen a beginning almost exactly the same on another one. Can't remember if it was the one with the Mane Six or just Twi though.

Destroyed notes, Spike instantly sleeping, destroyed table. The book is new though, and the path after as well.

You sir are a genius. A goddamned genius!

Twilight is best wolf/alicorn/changeling/whatever-it-is-you-like, I know this because of science :pinkiecrazy:

But seriously, this can only end well. I'm sure of it :trollestia: Pinkie reacts in such a... Pinkie kind of way that I couldn't help but smile :pinkiehappy:

Also, fun fact but horses aren't strictly herbivores. They're omnivores that can and will eat meat if they can get it. It makes them really agressive too:twilightoops:

short but good:pinkiehappy: AppleJack seems to be a more light light on the brains than normal but good story none the less:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: waiting on the next update

2202274 The reason for Applejack's odd behavior will be explained next chapter. :raritywink:

Four out of five dentists prefer longer chapters over more frequent updates, but do whatever floats your boat.

this won't end well for anyone in this story

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