30 Minute Challenge Stories

by Yukito

Prompt #497: Flash's Journey [TROLL, DARK-COMEDY?] [Flash Sentry]

Flash Sentry panted as he looked down the staircase before him. "Just 500 more to go." He tripped on the next step and fell down the stairs. He landed at the bottom on his head, snapping his neck.

Author's Note:

... So this actually got through. I guess they really aren't strict about what goes through and what doesn't so long as it's SFW ^_^;;

Comments

[Cheer]

Best chapter of anything ever.

[RK_Striker_JK_5]

I think you just gave him more characterization than the movie itself. :p

[Blue_Paladin42]

[Pen Brush]

Isnt he...a Pegasus? Cant he have just flown down the steps?

[Zum1UDontNo]

I love the subtle way you built up their relationship. The musical number was great too.