The Aperture in my Heart

by matrixjorel

Sequel

Link to the sequel: Light of the Aperture

Comments

[Menoshe]

...What am I getting myself into?

[ChoccieWings]

YES! HAVE TO READ LATER

[Fareseed]

Dang, I have a lot to read. Whit this and the sequel in read later; I am up in 520 stories. I need more free time.
No, screw free time, I need the clone spell from 'Perfect for me'.

[Ditzy_Hooves_1]

I am Oddly intrigued by this story.....*scratches chin* yes......might be good carry on!

[Ditzy_Hooves_1]

1393603

But it iz!!! HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHHA

[redblue293]

1393571 only if I understood what the picture meant.

[Ebony]

I read the description but not the story, so all I can say is: *RCV engaged*
GODDAMNIT WHEATLY, THOU HATH ROYALLY SCREWED EVERYTHING UP,
AGAIN!

*ahem* That is all.

[Matdat]

I read this some days ago, and I haven't yet figured out what to comment in a rewarding way here, Ill give this a shot though.
Hm, Im pretty new fan of MLP:FIM, and have been around this show for barely a month, half of that time on this site.
I have read through different fics, but not yet a crossover like this. Eventhough this was amongst the first stories on my "Read Later"-list (portal and MLP, i mean, come on ), I somehow kept on saving it for later, as I couldn't get my hopes high. I thought - how can you combine Portal and MLP into something that will make sense and will be an interesting read?
Wow, if I only know how wrong I was.

This was an awesomely implemented crossover. Not only did it follow the FIM-canon to an strangely detailed level, it also explained some of the things in the first episodes that were left out in the actual series. (Where Celestia was, what that floating thing was, etc)

This was a truly interesting and enjoyable read, and thanks for putting it up here for .. well, everone to read

The characters are, in my opinion, well-described. Eventhough, as earlier comments point out, Weatley isn't the exact same as in Portal, that didn't throw me off at all, being in the circumstances this fic puts everyone in, and, where Portal left him off.
The story makes sense, and keeps inline (until the very last chapters) with main canon, its described in an even better way than FIM did, as you cover multiple views and thoughts of everyone around :)

Afterall, Im kind of regretting that I thought this would turn out bad, but now I'll soon get around to start looking at the sequel, and see where that goes, and Im kind of looking forward to that

Thanks again for putting this up here, it was a great read!
Liked and faved
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[BronyBlast9000]

Wheatly WHY MUST YOU ALLWAYS BUCK UP!!!!!!!!!!!

[Magical Trevor]

SEQUEL?!?! YES! THAT JUST MADE MY NIGHT! 8D NO SLEEPING FOR ME! 8D
...
Crap, no sleeping for me... ; ;

[nicksterra]

8558137

Wow, a five year old comment.

Neat.