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Mr. Cake sees the town around him change- except for his little slice of life, behind the counter. He meets old friends, makes new ones, and ends up selling a multitude of muffins.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

I read this on fanfiction.net and thought it was really good, so I figure I'd leave my comment here instead. This was a very well written funny ship fic that borders on diabetic levels of d'awww and I love how Carrot and the doctor play off each other. There isn't much else I can say. I do like the fact that Mr.Cake reads those celerity gossip rags like my old man.

STAGE CLEAR:
This Fan-Fiction
Writing: A+
Pacing: A+
Comedy: B+
Time: F...WHAT DO YOU MEAN I DID BADLY ON TIME?
Score: 4.5 Stars
:yay:

169650

Seconded, This fic made me d'awwwwww a lot, pretty funny and well written, I giggled through the whole thing :derpytongue2:

Thanks for the kind words. Should I add a comedy tag, 169760 and 169650? :unsuresweetie:

Well this was a good chapter, I can just imagine the surprise Cup and the twins got when they saw Pinkie floating by:rainbowlaugh:

Also liked the implied TwiPie, my favorite ship:pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish: Can't wait to read more!!

So D'aaw, and is that TwiPie I spy? Well if it didn't already hold my interest it does now.

Well I for one would have approved our new pink overlord :pinkiecrazy:
Another amusing chapter, poor Carrot, he just wants to read his magezine.

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