Mr. Cake sees the town around him change- except for his little slice of life, behind the counter. He meets old friends, makes new ones, and ends up selling a multitude of muffins.
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I read this on fanfiction.net and thought it was really good, so I figure I'd leave my comment here instead. This was a very well written funny ship fic that borders on diabetic levels of d'awww and I love how Carrot and the doctor play off each other. There isn't much else I can say. I do like the fact that Mr.Cake reads those celerity gossip rags like my old man.
Nice story
STAGE CLEAR:
This Fan-Fiction
Writing: A+
Pacing: A+
Comedy: B+
Time: F...WHAT DO YOU MEAN I DID BADLY ON TIME?
Score: 4.5 Stars
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Seconded, This fic made me d'awwwwww a lot, pretty funny and well written, I giggled through the whole thing
Thanks for the kind words. Should I add a comedy tag, 169760 and 169650?
Well this was a good chapter, I can just imagine the surprise Cup and the twins got when they saw Pinkie floating by
Also liked the implied TwiPie, my favorite ship Can't wait to read more!!
So D'aaw, and is that TwiPie I spy? Well if it didn't already hold my interest it does now.
Well I for one would have approved our new pink overlord
Another amusing chapter, poor Carrot, he just wants to read his magezine.
yay...
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