Story idea:The blanks
Chapter is being done but I thought of this for a future
"RUN!" screamed mares and stallions. Panic and fear was thick throughout the town as strange creatures from the Everfree forest attacked.
"GIVE US APPLEBLOOM!" was the only thing they would say as the sluaghterd their victims.
"HEY ASSWIPES!" shouted Drew as he began to unleash blasts of darkness at them covering the area in dust.
"Heh, think I got them.....what the?" Drew took a couple of steps back as the creatures walked through the dust and straight towards them.
"How....did...you..."
"KAAAAAMMMMMEEEEEEHHHHHAAAAAAAMMMMEEEEHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Drew looked to his side to see Brice in his "super sayian" form launching a kamehameha.
"Heh, I think that did it." he said powering down
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" came a dark voice
"There.....there's no way!" said Brice as the figures continued to proceed towards them but stopped as one of them took point.
"Give, us Applebloom and we will leave."
"...Who are you?" asked Brice, going back into his super sayian form.
"Hah, it's a long story but to sum it up we live in Everfree forest and once a year somepony recives "The Mark" forcing us to banish them but two years ago Applebloom came to our villiage and escaped.....she must return."
"AND WHAT MAKES YOU THINK WE'LL LET YOU!" shouted Drew.
"You can't hurt us, so their is not point in resisting."
"...What's your name?" asked Brice getting a confused look.
"Greyhoof."
"Drew, do you anything about a Greyhoof?" Brice turned to Drew to see he had a look of terror on his face.
"Dude, are you okay?"
"We...can't win......."
"Drew, who is this?"
"Their, from a story called Tale of the blanks.......we should give them Applebloom."
"....ARE YOU INSANE!"
"No, he is correct we will keep her safe, forever."
"If you try to take her I will kill you."
"Why do you care for the filly?"
"She saved my life.....I owe her it to her."
"HAH, you'd give up your life for her?"
"Who says I'm dying?" he vanished for a second a reappered behind Grey Hoof.
"NOW, TAKE THIS!" Brice slammed both of his fists full force into him.
"Was that suppose to hurt?"
"OKAY, HOW THE HELL ARE YOU NOT DEAD!"
"Hah, I doubt you could harm me never mind wwwwwoooooooooowwwwww!" he shouted as a giant vine grabbed him and began to slam him against the ground.
"VINE!" shouted Brice sounding happier than he had ever before.
"What, you thought we'd let you fight alone?"
"We?" said Drew as Ice, Blaze, Graze, Dark and Amy all stepped out from behind her.
"Heh, thought as much....but you have to leave."
"What, why?" asked Graze.
"I hit these things with a maxed out kamehameha.....they didn't even flinch." the group looked shocked.
"Brice..."
"No, Vine put him done before he does something."
"I.....can't....move." everybody looked at Grey Hoof to see the vine was completley black.
"It seems we have a bargning chip." said Grey Hoof laughing.
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Author's notes: Okay, this isn't tonights chapter[for those to lazy to read the announcment at the top....*cough*Dark*cough*] just tell me if you think I should put this in, in the future or not.[This isn't the complete chapter]
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hmmm i wonder who amy might be? ;3 also MAY THEY FEAST ON THE MIGHTY POWER OF MY SWORD DUBBED FIRST!!!!
226649...Not sure if I'm gonna give you what you requested or not.
226675 *pulls out random microphone and starts singing* T-T
226680..Dam you...FINE YOU GET YOUR SWORD.
226683 oh you were talking about the sword? wait, the "Senbonzakura" sword, or the "FIRST!!!!!" sword?
226689 yakuya's Senbonzakura
226693 im fine with that. also because Anarchy has shown up i wont be "brushie brushie" -ing you. also im eaving it private and unpublished for now but i'm in the works with my own story. wether its a win or a fail. you'll have t wait and see
226767 Can I see it?
233100 Why the question mark?
233120 And this time it is metaphorical.
233102 check again
233142 Well played but no comment on the chapter? Vine I'm dissapointed.
233146 hey ice look at this new hammer i found!
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233153....Look at this sword I foundth03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/302/e/3/ice_sword_by_myrdah-d31rxrg.jpg
233158 look i "made" a new friend
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233193...SPARKY drawingnow.com/file/pic/gallery/92305.jpg
233196 no offense but you're being really redundant. look off into the great wilds of the internet and bring back a fresh catch for once. bless your face. if you sneezed during this conversation bless you. peace off. hnng *throws self out a window*
233223 You got a problem with Sparky?
233223 i recommend any brony/tobuscus fan to read 'my little tobuscus'
233289 That was a terrible fic.
233298 to each their own i guess
233305 True but c'mon we all know Tobuscus isn't just "Shoot, here's my number." or "HotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHotHot." or "AW GOD DANG IT I CAN'T JUMP THAT HIGH!" or.....you get the picture.
233367 well vine's probably gonna break your legs before you get a chance to fight.
since graze is in, im guessing he'll win
233367 Well, not sure if it is I mean I just killed the closest thing to a go....wait sun....moon.........
and all of a sudden I need a new Oc.
233380 I can tell you right now he is *SLAM* what the hell OH CRAP IT'S CHARGE!
233380: She won't catch me.....I hope.
233382: Well if it ain't might as well start the Mare-Pocalypse.
233387: RUN ITS MY DAD!!! WHAP!!! SAVE YOURSELFS!!!
233395 I would but you know.....just killed Celestia..........AH HA LOOP HOLE!
233401: Yeah but yah don't need her 4 a Mare-Pocalypse........and beside you still have Luna.
233415 and me
233425: Yes you and the mane 6 and A LOT of background ponies.
But were not interested in them.
233415 Problem is Luna will try to kill me....and probably fail then go nightmare...when she's in heat....trendils of darknes....DAM IT THAT'S STUCK IN MY HEAD!
233440: Well since its stuck....go to your story and start typing then!
233543:
........Shame...
233594 233543 I love having control over who wins.
GOD DAMN YOU FIMFICTION!!!! I WILL NOT BE TROLLED BY THE SITE ITSELF!!!
233599: IKR?!?!
It just sucks when you're on the receiving end of the trolling....
233600 233605 If anything, Vine will find out first and she knows something that happens to somebody.
233605 but its so much fun to troll you guys. causing internal turmoil and stuff. right dark? right ice?
_
233612: Dammit....
233617: Damn you and your trolling.... well you are great at it and all.
233617 Indeed
233633 a successful troll is a smart troll. im only good at it because both kickass and killjoy ask for my advice on the story. for instance a certain "confrontation" between teachers will be happening soon
233633>>233634 you two do realize that because of ~spoiler~ rules im technically trolling both of you now.
i know something both of you know but neither are allowed to tell the other
233648....233633 Dark you lose a leg.
233652 wait is that this story? do i take his leg?! CAN I BEAT HIM WITH HIS OWN LEG PLZ??????
233660 I facepalmed so hard its left a mark.
Me Gusta!
Shmexy Sounding Troll
Never Never Stop!
233669 Fake-Trolling maneuvar #87 is a success! *tallies up 6,543,987,000 troll*
233652: Really.....WTF!!! Great...thank GODDESSES I'm a pegasus.
233660: NO!!!
233678: I actually counted: 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 X Infinite.
233743 Infinite is't a number it's a concept that it can never end but it can be 0
233748: Oh......and anything X 0 equals 0......sorry.
BUT WHY do I get a legged broken/torned off?