I'm a travelling magician, one of the many you will find plying the trade roads between Canterlot, Hoofington and Fillydelphia giving shows in the public spaces of towns big and small. I had some ... setbacks early in my career. I guess you could say that I've got everything under control now but it all could come disastrously unstuck if I can't get rid of that inquisitive little purple unicorn.
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With talent like this you should be on the featured list! My my, you just came out of nowhere and started posting gold diddn't you? But I digress, while there maybe one or two faults here and there I'm finding this very intriguing and I'm slowly pulling the pieces together...
"Like four unicorns cast it at once."
Snorting dust.
Earth pony.
Probably doing something illegal.
He is snorting ground unicorn horns, probably grave robbing. Or cocain idunnolol. Continue wih haste and know that if no one else will, I shall follow this story closely and eagarly. I'm watching you. FOREVERRRR!
Why the bollocks is this being ignored?! This is some great writing and I'd hate to see it go to waste...
i'm liking this! :P
This is it? There has to be more! I know you're not famous but still! Don't let this die!
Well this should be interesting. A decent start. Onward, for continued reading, then.
Hmm, so... not an alternate Trixie? Seems to be some poor sap who showed up after her first, possibly second, appearance. Now what part of this has Twilight so high strung? Perhaps the lack of historical accuracy? Still proving a worthy read, nonetheless.
Okay, that explains that, then. What bugged Twilight was the unusual 'magic' being performed by one she identified as a wizard. As an extreme magical specialist, that would bug the hell out of here, wouldn't it? Oh, and in the bit about the Gala? You put 'hand' instead of 'hoof'.
MuzzledElk seems to be on the right track, but I doubt it is that simple. This Earth Pony, whose name you have not mentioned yet, is a geomancer of some sort. That detail is important to how this is being done, somehow. Perhaps from the destroyed school, the magical stone and such from the building? But there was mention of resupply. So it can't be just that. I wonder, I wonder.
Nothing really new to go on figuring out that little mystery you went and saddled us with. Maybe next chapter. Still a good read, though.