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EXOLIEF
I mainly write porn, it's all in good fun.
EXOLIEF
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Tentacle sex is best sex.
The actual action and 'action' were very good, but I would have preferred less of a Dark bent, especially at the ending. On the whole, not bad, but that was definitely a mark against it.
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I'm still really bad at it.
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How does I Dark?
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You do it less or not at all, because it's rarely actually a benefit to the story.
Consentacles are the best tentacles and all that jazz.
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Dude, can we get some thumbs up on this? This guy is pure truth.
Also a damn good writer.
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I'd mark you in the same company, good fellow.
This should definitely be continued, or at least have sequels featuring different characters
Zecora sequel please!!!
Do. Not. Let. Chryssy. DIE!
Or I find you and I will hurt you. 
Other than that, good story.!
While this was very hot, I feel the need to point out that either Chrysalis has a broken horn, or she doesn't - whether healed or never broken to begin with. Right now I'm a bit confused as to what's the case here.
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WOW, I can't believe I forgot to fix that. My apologies :
I wrote the first 1/5th about 2 weeks before I picked it back up and never re-read the intro. I am a certified dumb :I
This should be continued
I've read some crazy shit, this comes nowhere close to being the crazies, or the worst. And I've had ... Kinkier days when I was in equestria, but that was before Celestia was born.
"Trixie, on the other hand, wasn’t faring much better"
Change "on the other hand" to "meanwhile"
Now that I'm done nitpicking, back to fapping :D
continue this!
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Interestingly enough, the phrase is used in Equestria. Multiple times, even!
Need to continue this! Could be made into an awesome story with addictive tentacle making all ponies slaves slowly and forming more creatures of same kind!
This was actually the first dark story I've ever read here.
And I was totally against dark stories when I began on this site.
You have converted me.
I await a sequel.
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Well that's...an honor, I suppose
I don't really do Dark, but I guess I made an impact, at least. Which is interesting
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I haven't seen all of season 2 (or 3 for that matter), so Chrysalis' character is kind of foreign to me. I'm slowly catching up (hopefully before season 4 comes out!)
2172368 Oh I know they use it. I was talking about sentence structure
Tenticlop is best clop
You definitely need to do a sequal, EXO
How come I never read this before? It's amazing. Wow... just.. Wow. Pure genious
I feel sorry for Chrysalis. I wish it could be Dimond Tiara or Silver Spoon.
But you need to fix both of this lines.
Other thanthat this is how a mindbreak and tentacles story should go.
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Goddamn I just re-read this yesterday too and I still missed those.
Anyway, thanks man, I really do like this concept. Looking forward to coming back to it soon
Edit: fixed
well another story done
2167388: Debatable. I like tentacles best when there IS no consent... at least at first.
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Not quite, I'm expanding it into a full-blown story soon
2626834 no this story is in my group as admin i should read all the stories in the group
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Err, I suppose
"Contains Tentacles: Mind Control"
... Yeah... I was kinda looking for the story called "It's Magic" Where Pinkie's cousin perfoms magic without a horn...
Meh, I've read wierder stuff than this, maybe I'll read it? Who knows.
No, I just can't read it, i'm not a clopper and i always end up laughing my ass of, You can even kill of Rainbow Dash in a clopfic and i'll still be laughing my ass of.
Wow I can't believe this is actually getting continued. I thought you finished it exolief?
2668843 I thought so too, but I ended up making more of it
So it's been read, Not nearly as wierd as the stuff i normally read.
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The rest of the story will be pretty normal by comparison
2671736 Hehe, not much of a... Clopfic, then is it?
Try to make it wierder.
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Err... No?
2678723 ...
"Pulls out revolver"
You heard me.
Well that was... interesting...
Ah, who am I kidding? I have a tentacle fetish, sue me.
I can't wait for more.
Oh shit, I thought it was Discord.
is this story frozen?
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On Hiatus, so... yeah.