I'm not a professional writer, I'm just someone writing fics for fun and nothing more.
Due to a teleporter mess up, the hero from the town of Falconreach ends up in Equestria. Trying to find his way back he meets up with a group of friendly ponies and a not so friendly villain. Can he get home and save this world from the coming evil?
Crossover with my DragonFable character and MLP. So there might be some spoilers to the game if you haven't play it yet (if you care that is).
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I just want to say that i know there might be some(ok a lot) of grammar problems, please fell free to note them out.
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Will do, when I get the time.
(Squeals like a pig) SQUEEEEE!!!! someone finally did the thing I hoped would happen!
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Happy that I made someone day
Halle-mutherfuckin-lujah.
Holy *yay* somebody actually did this. Okay, whatever you do, DON'T let Cycero anywhere near Pinkie, The fourth wall couldn't take it, and we definitely don't need them making a Nitroglycerin spongecake.
YUS WE DO!
Fable crossover? Hell yes!
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Nono, it's a "Dragonfable" Crossover. If you don't know, Dragonfable is a free to play flash based browser rpg known for it's fantastic art, intriguing plot, terrific development team, horrible puns, and true, weekly updates. Dragonfable was created by Artix Entertainment, the same company behind the Flash MMORPG AdventureQuest Worlds.
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Yeah, I wrote the comment before reading. Still tracking though.
Phew, who knew that writing a fight scene was hard work. Anyway, there might be a lot a grammar mistakes so please point them out (If yall what too that is
) BATTLEON!
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Sadly no, but don't worry the evil will be the sort of thing that will bring an endless age of whatever it wants (maybe
Cysero + Pinkie = Say bye bye to your precious fourth wall!
Uh... You kinda changed tenses... A lot...
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Working on editing this chapter, almost done>>169814 My greatest weakness in writing, my brain tend to jump around a lot, hard to keep track
And finish, hopefully this is better than before. Sorry about that, writing is so hard for me
, and that's why I'm doing this story to get better at it
. Now on to the second chapter
.
phew, hopefully the grammar is a bit better than chapter 1 first time. Here we have some information of Lore for my non-AE readers, what part of the timeline it takes place in the DragonFable universe, and see some of Jack personality. Have fun reading as I get Wistala story started, this one is going to be fun to write
BATTLEON!
p.s. The next chapter will have a better name and I'm still working on the transition between Word and the way FIM handle copy and paste.
so.. many.. errors... and why didnt you mention xan?
185977 Didn't cross my mind, and ya sorry about the errors, still working on it
187526 here the character sheet of my df character that i'm basing for Jack http://www.dragonfable.com/df-chardetail.asp?id=19722343
Chapter 3 is half way done, hopefully be out this week.
I mostly blame my easy distracted brain for my grammar problems (that and other mental disorders
). Hopefully this is still a good story and yall are enjoying it. Might need to get a pre-reader, would anyone like to volunteer.
i enjoyed it... interesting premise.... but the grammer is a throwback to the spiderses.
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How else would you be able to put a GPS in your backpack without the GPS bursting through it.
Yes I'm still looking for a proof reader
Sure if you want, it going to be awhile though, ch4 is taking so long because of college.
Sorry for the long update. This part was a bit hard to write, and maybe be a bit bland. As always there might be a lot of grammar mistakes. Feel free to point them out, part of my plan is to edit the mistakes of my chapters soon, so any outside help will be a big help. Anyway in the next chapter be ready to battleon.
264135Lern ot spek engrish!
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English is mine main language, but due to some mental disabilities I have a hard time to put ideas in my head down on paper in a neat way(this is why my grammar is not so good). Also my spelling is low but my vocabulary is high. I'm writing this story to try and fix that, because I'm tired of not be able to write good. I'm 19 years old, i should be able to write something descent once in a while (right?).
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So what. I have Aspergers, ADD, ADHD, sensory perception disorder, oh! And I'm a sociopath.
I can write better than this.
Oh and by the way my good sir... These and this, ARE NOT INTERCHANGEABLE!!!
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That good for you. But I can't, that is why I'm working on it by writing this story. As the old saying go "Practice makes perfect", so here I am practicing, it might not be good, but I'm giving it my all.That better than I have ever done in my life so far, other than writing essays for school and college. I still trying to program my brain to get over my writing problem, and it not going to happen in a night, nor even a month, but probably a year of consent work. I expect bugs along the way, so please help me out by pointing the errors, otherwise my brain might just overlook it and see it correct.
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Yes we do.
There is always more room for nitroglycerin spongecake.
Its been a month...wow. So ya as before grammar spelling, etc. Hopefully the next chapter won't take that long.
Have fun.
I like this story alot But one major grammar error is eating me. At the end when you say he "meted", that is not a word. It should just be met as it is in past tense.
Otherwise. keep up the good work.
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Thank you changing it right away.
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Maybe
Phew, this is a big one. I know there are many errors so feel free to point them out and I'll try to fix them (If i can, I'm getting wired glitchs from copy from Word and pasting it here.) Also open for names for the flying golems and the dragon like creatures; making up names I'm not good at
. So ya...I'm also trying to find way to upload pictures to describe some of the items in the story (If i can find the way). Have fun.
Edit. Pictures further down in the comments.
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Thank you
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I probably would too, but Jack is mostly a warrior so he well use his weapons for most of the fights. Plus I don't think he has done the Ravenloss storyline just yet in the time period I have him in. Closed, but not yet.
funny I was thinking of writing an AQW crossover but then again if I did id put my character in it and he's just so overpowered, the story would end up a power trip. plus Founder status makes him god tier ;3
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Never stop the AE staff, do what they do. Make the villain just as or more powerful than your character. You could also make you character lose some of his power (or whatever else that make him powerful) and start from there, or any other ways you think of. Someone power only affects a story in a small way (in my opinion); its more of the journey and the adventure you make from it that affects the story. But I'm just rambling on, write whatever you want to write, and have fun writing it.
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I'm wondering how would ponies take to someone in Nulgath Armour carrying Ungodly Reavers
explain how I put THIS
~~> http://www.aq.com/aw-character.asp?id=darth%20stan
in a story?!
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Don't know, but it would be a very very very (go on for a while) grim-dark story. But like I said before, write what you want to write. On the side note, isn't there a story were DEATH himself live with the ponies (or something?
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I believe it was a romance story with death.
Anyways I guess I can put different Armour on him and nother weapon. I don't know, or I could do like a party of a 4 or 3 characters with different classes
Berzerker
Mage
Chaos Shaper
Healer
Doomknight
Guardian
Dragonlord
Necromancer
Et cetera ya know, any combination of the classes ingame and just have them fight a pony chaos lord and minions. Hmmm sounds very promising
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*checkaboxthatsaidinspiredabronytomakeaAQWcrossover*
Now, for a magic trick.
*Shuffle*
"Is this your card?"
"I don't know."
"...Is it a red card?"
"I don't know what red is."
"...Ta-daaaaaaaaaaa..."
PICS, ya'll like pics right.
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This is a bad drawing on paint of the symbol on the tablet
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Dragonlord's Loss
http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy265/Omega_Code92/Hammer.jpg
Lim's Hybrid Hammer
Weapons belong to their rightful artiest of AE.
As before grammar etc,etc. So off to see the dragons. How well you think this will turn out.
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SHHHHH, don't let RD know.
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OH i will, MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Just be patience till then k. Now on with the next chapter.
I know this might be old news, but this should be a better(hopefully) picture of the symbol on the tablet.
Drawn by me...horrible at the editing I know...don't expect me to get good at it in a single night.
http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy265/Omega_Code92/Symbol-1.jpg
Drew this at one of my classes, bored out of my mind.