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Mr.Market


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After a decisive loss in an arranged Space Battle, the crew of the Black Mambo are forced to part with their old modified airship as a trophy for their opponent. Basically left stranded in Equestria, they must find a way to make a return to their usual travels but, with no money and access to adequate parts, they may not be able to go anywhere outside of Equestria without help.

So, how do the crew cope with such conditions? Enter Discord! The one being with the power to make materials appear with a fingersnap!(And convince Blueblood to 'donate' bits.) The crew may use these parts to build a new ship but there's a catch: Parts brought by Discord must be earned through work and good deeds so it will take time and effort.

Everyday the crew will be tested in some way or other to earn funds and ship parts: A variety of jobs and tasks, missions involving some risk, the curious CMC, a Black Pirate captain and crew, Topsy Turvy, a "Great evil", the weather, and everyday life.

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A special thanks to AppleBucker22 and IF LQ-84i Type Vega for the inspiration in making my first fic. It would not be possible without them.:twilightsmile:

EDIT: There are a number of links within the story that lead to either music or a couple of pictures.

well its definitely an interesting start to a story from what I saw you did a pretty good job I didn't really see to much that needed work and what I did see was small descriptive/sentence errors.

2302557 I see. I'm glad to know that I managed to start well enough. That said, I would like to know as to what the errors were so that I may try to fix them. Also, I made some minor adjustments to Luna's, Celestia's and Twilight's last lines.

2302595 it wasn't anything major and once I finish up the last of the homework my profs gave me for the weekend I'll send you the places I found.

Y'know, I kinda feel like a jerk for leaving you guys like that now. 2300791 I do not really see why I should be thanked as the story idea was mostly yours, I didn't help on grammar or spelling issues. I do not see why I should be thanked, but thanks for the thanks. A great start if ya ask me.

2303035 If I hadn't faced you and AppleBucker22 I probably would not have come up with this. By the way, I was being serious when I mentioned that your OC's would be making more appearances later on.

2303061 Yet you might've come up with something equally as...crazy a start as this. :moustache: More appearances? Something tells me Nocturnal might end up crashing the ship...

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