And so I sit, alone with the dark and the quiet, treading the secret corridors of my mind & soul and always discovering the oddest things. . . .
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Everypony knows of Lyra's sort of strange obsession, but it never really was that big of a deal, just like nerds are obsessed with reading. But, one night, Lyra's dreams are fulfilled. At least the first part....
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There's something in Twilight's closet, and it is most certainly not a pony.
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Yes, I believe that there is some speck of originality in here! If not in the idea, then at least in the story and writing itself! Give it a chance!
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i love this idea too.
Lol Keep up the work!
Well, that was pretty short. And I was just getting into it.
Short but this story has me hooked
NYES.
wut.
so when is he gunna come out of the closets.... wink wink nudge nudge
I'm sorry but I have to ask, but is he Russian?
2163146
No such thing as Russia anymore
2163149 What do you mean by this?
2163254
Well, back on Earth, it's the post-apocalypse. More will be explained later.
2163331 Im going to guess that this dude is American. Because he said something about charging for freedom, which I know I have never read any official historical documents or any hollywood films of a soldier yelling this OTHER than American soldiers. Giving your life for freedom is a really big part of American culture so I can only assume he is American.
Like how the soldier that attacked him yelled "URA!", if I know about whatever culture had this in famous media and history I could tell you which nationality he was/is.
2163331 Yes I see what your going at. Good so far
2163331 ah I see.
*looks at cover picture*
I like dis
Well, if you say so...
reads...
Surely you mean "Говно"?
Okay, no Rossiya anymore, but certainly some of them still speak Russian?
Can't give a solid judgment yet, but would definitely follow up to see how it would go.
Cant Wait For The Next Chapter.
In The Mean Time,PONIEZ.
2166106
Well, he's not Russian, so, no, he means "Shit."
2166491 Meh, it's not meant as a serious comment anyhow. The moustache says so.
Anyway, do keep it up.
Holy shit, that imagery! Blood everywhere! This is going to be good, I can feel it.
2166963
I've been told that I'm a fantastic writer
2167014 Well you were told right.
Ushanka, maybe? Shapka is a russian word for any kind of hat.
Also, HE NEEDS TO COME OUT OF THE CLOSET.
Aaaand so much for good first impressions.
then
Change that.
The dude is awfully cool with the fact that there's, you know, ponies.
This is pretty nice, actually. Have an upvote.
2168887 The mimicry is intentional. He uses it once more after that as well.
2168819
Yes, that's what I meant. And wow.
2168904
I know. It just sounds awkward, that's all.
I'm enjoying this despite how short the chapters are.
Also Alec seems to be a perfect example that hindsight is 20/20
"Uh, parlay, diplomacy, conversations? Oh fudge it." *bang*
Wait wait wait, he dropped his gun by accident? So much for a paranoid survivalist.
2169401
Actually it was the casing of the bullet that Twilight found and now they also have the bullet, but shouldn't it have punched clean trough the wing or am i overestimating the power of this handgun?
2169629
I probably should have described it a little more: what I had in mind was a little .22. He has a .45, but he didn't want to hurt her all that bad.
2169629 Oh I see. Totally missed the descriptors if they were there. Thanks.
This human better not be a pansy...
I look forward to your future chapters, please update often.
2164473
Dear Princess Celestia yes!
2170563
He's a survivor of the apocalypse, and a veteran of three wars. Pansy? I think not.
2170674
Well, the hell is with the "I'ma surrender attitude?" Sounds like a pansy to me...
But in all seriousness, pretty cool story. Fav'd and Thumb'd
2171193
Okay, he's in an alien world. Yes he has guns, but they have limited ammo. If he doesn't surrender, what will become of him?
He knows he decisions were rash, but he doesn't want to dig his grave any deeper
Why in every HiE fic, ponies are stronger than humans? That's stupid.
2172370
Well, I don't want to derail your story so ignore the next few sentences...
[ignore]BUT he has lived in a post-apoca world for sometime, I would imagine he can use make shift weapons. Maybe have him live in everfree for a bit... unceremoniously trading with the ponies once in a while. After that he either gets captured or get convinced to go into town by Lyra.[/ignore]
Okay, this is off to a kind of weird start.
2174029
It's supposed to be, so that's good.
2174047 Ah, I see. So, how did Lyra find him?
Her own fault if she finds herself with a shotgun shell in her chest.
Also lol at the chronic kleptomania, like a true RPG player take everything that's not nailed down and could perhaps sometime maybe proof useful.
And if assault is needed to do that only do it if nobody else is watching.
He acted like a true adventurer.
2174127
Yeah, I enjoyed that fact as well. He acted much like an RPG player would have...
Ponies have plastic Ziploc bags? That seems a little...odd to me.
2174731
And then he starts hoarding everything he steals in the dragons cave and when the ponies finally find him half of the stuff in ponyville is there.
2174781
lol'd
Chronic Kleptomania much?