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Rainbow Dash has had a crush on Pinkie Pie ever since they met, but when Rainbow finds out that Pinkie Pie has a crush on somepony, she becomes determined to find out who.

Who could it possibly be?

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Seems good, I get the feeling Dashie would be the sort to be nervous about the subject of love

2157350 I like that song! :derpyderp2: Also, I see what you did there... :twilightsmile:

Yay PinkieDash.
A good start for your first fic. I hope Rainbow has some crazy schemes to try and find out who Pinkie Pie has a crush on.

Good stuff, not sure what the silent dislikes are for.

Silver out!

Not much of a shipping person, and I try to not single myself out towards one type of shipping. I like it thoug. Well written :pinkiehappy:

It's awesome you have nothing to worry about its a very good fic way better than mine anyway:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

2157350ya I can see that and this related

Wouldn't you're legs get tired?

"You're" should be "your" - an easy way to remember the difference is that "you're" stands for "you are." When in doubt, just see if the substitution works.

For a moment, I considered bailing, saying I had somewhere to be. Maybe I had to be practicing to audition for the Wonderbolts... Or maybe that I forgot to clear the clouds this morning.

Remove "that" - it doesn't really make sense in context.

Overall, your grammar's actually pretty good compared to other fics I read and you seem to have a good interpretation of Rainbow's personality. It's a bit too soon for me to make any definitive judgments, but I look forward to seeing how this turns out. :pinkiesmile:

2198195 Thank you for pointing that out! :twilightsmile: I'm almost there with the next chapter. I'm glad you like it so far! :yay:

Comment posted by Ignaltus deleted Apr 8th, 2013

*looks to comment above this one*
I think it's trying to communicate with us:derpyderp1:

A nice little story here so far. The formatting is a bit odd for me, but it does fit how I would imagine Rainbow Dash speaking to herself, or other ponies.
I'll give it a fave for now but hold off on an upvote:moustache:

2273410 okie dokie! I'm glad you like it! :twilightsmile:

I like it
But I'm sure the crush is spike :ajsmug:

Very well made, I'm really excited fer da new chap

Poor Dashie's having a panic attack

2682796 Haha, yeah! Sorry for the wait. Got busy with Finals and Vacation and such. C: :twilightblush:

2682814I Know how Finals can get. you know i am currently rereading the first two chapters cuz I forgot what was going on.

2682826 Hehe. I had to reread them too. :twilightsheepish:

2682840oh God that's bad when the author doesn't even remember whats going on

2682847 Yeah. I figured it out though, thankfully. :derpytongue2:

2682875Okay, now that i am caught up, I have to ask: this is gonna end up like party of one, but the other way around, isn't it? I mean, judging from your sig and the group i found this story in it is obvius who pinkies crush is. we arent reading to find out, were reading to see how Dashie finds out.

2682958 That last part is true, in fact. However, no, this will not be exactly a flipped sort of Party of One. It may be somewhat similar since Dash is in a state of panic, but it won't end exactly like Party of One did.

Comment posted by Mmhh12 deleted Jun 6th, 2013

2682963well that's obvious the ponies involved have different personalities and are panicking for different reasons. cant wait to see it

2682985 Heh, I'll try to be quicker with the next few chapters.... :twilightblush:

This is Rainbow Dash birthday.:pinkiehappy:

i wonder if it's spike that pinkie has a crush on

I almost did not get alerted to the update.:fluttershysad:

3090597I know right?

It would have been The. WORST, possible, THING!:raritywink:

BEST SHIP EVER! This is by FAR my favorite pinkie dash story!

It's an 'I love Rainbow dash' party! :pinkiehappy:

3090611 I cant wait for the next chapter... I LOVE IT! :coolphoto::heart::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::raritystarry::raritywink::scootangel::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::yay::trollestia: (sorry i commented twice :twilightblush:)

3243505 Ohhhmmyygosh! I'm soo glad you like it! :pinkiehappy: And don't worry abut the comments, it really means a lot :twilightsmile:

3244214 i am working on one of my own, if you wouldn't mind to look at it :twilightblush: Oh and its inspired by you, (so was my account, fyi you can type it up on your phone, that's what i do!:raritywink: NO ONE KNOWS!:pinkiecrazy:)

3244245 Awesome! I never knew I could provide inspiration.. :derpyderp2: I'll be sure to check it out! :twilightsmile:

I'm excited for a new chapter! This story is great!!!:heart::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::yay:

3373152 ikr! because rd is all like :rainbowhuh: becasue she doesnt know WHO pinkie likes, while WE know pinkie likes rd. i am all like:facehoof: to rd, while i am like :flutterrage: < PINKIE!!! JUST... ER... AGGAHAAHHAHAGAGAGHAHGAHAGHAGHAGHAHG! ) to pinkie

EDIT: Ok, now i am embarrased with myself

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