• Member Since 8th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 5th, 2017

lunaisthebest


i like my Luna :3

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Celestia is a leader of Equestria, and even though she is known for being charitable, even she cannot be pure-minded forever.


Our story here has many OCs in it, it is also a crossover in the ONLY way i could ever possibly like one. I've taken assassin's creed and revamped it.

edit: i have been told that my story doesn't have much background to it... so here is a background

The story takes place two years after Nightmare Moon's banishment, but instead of going to the G4 universe, it branched off and Celestia became corrupt with the power she realized that she had within her.

the rest is in the first chapter... not the prelude...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

2225429 silly... this story is going to be a long one... SO SUSRICBE AND WAIT FRO THE CHAPTERS TO UNRAVEL THE STORY BEFORE YOUR VERY EYES! :3

Blue = wut
Red = Capital

"There is nowhere to sign... Only a creed"
"Then tell me the creed, I'll do what it takes."
"Repeat after me."
"Alright."
"I am an assassin, therefore I will stay my blade,"
"From that of an innocent's life,"
"I promise to kill evil-doers and bring light to the world,"
"I will never break these rules and follow them in my life,"
"For this is our creed, our law, we are free, anything is allowed,"

Yup.
You need a proofreader.
Badly.

2226175 the 'stay' is not wrong... in the game(and after looking it up) "stay" means "avoid" or "halt" hence "I will stay my blade" "I will keep my blade" "I will prevent my blade"

2226197
its sad noone likes it but me :fluttercry:

2226316 it's because i cliff-hanged them... it'll get better, don't worry

Ah, great work. But... FER LUNA'S SAKE PEOPLE! Give a bloody reason to dislike before ya do it! Initiating counter-like.

2266293 initating thank-you! and people just like to spam that bloody dislike button....

sorry luna! I didnt know my parents would do something at 3!

2481760 it's ok! i didn't call anything, i just wanted to get SOMETHING out there

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