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LunasCaptain


Just a simple pony fan, interested in further exploring the shell of MLP:FiM. Mostly through grimdarks and AU/OC stories. You have been warned.

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Poison Dart, Lunar guard, chose sides in the Lunar War. He chose to fly against his Princess, to support Celestia, to save Equestria. He attended the last battle with Nightmare Moon and was violently decapitated before he could make much of a difference.

But, of course, he didn't die. That would have been too easy.

Unable to relate to his few surviving friends among the Lunar Guard, and feared by his acquaintances in the Solar forces, there is exactly one pony who will talk to Dart: Princess Celestia, who banished his charge. She's strangely fascinated by this relic of her sister's powers, and keeps Dart at her side at all times. Which is why he has no choice but to tag along when she suddenly bucks her duties as the sole Equestrian Princess and takes off across the country, searching for the source of Luna's corruption. It soon becomes apparent that Dart isn't the only pony touched by the Nightmare's dark magic--and these remnants of her power aren't the only threat to their country.

Rated Teen for numerous sexual and alcohol references, as well violence and gore.

Cover art by Hero.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

This...this almost killed me.

But, hey, ignore me and my mangled typing (sorry about that, by the way)--please tell me what you think!

Well that was certain one of the better written scenes between Nightmare Moon and Celestia, and now the talking head? You got my attention though I do stand worried about the summary... thinking that this will end with Celestia turning evil or something... Well I will keep an eye on this.

-Celestia's Paladin

Sing with me now: "I... ain't got no body!"

Well, this is interesting! The summary drew me in, but the excellent writing has kept me here... the concept is certainly new as well, and a welcome change from the normal story routes. Looking forward to more! :yay:

The battle was well written. I enjoyed it.
The second chapter made me go :rainbowderp: But then I was intrigued.

This is... intriguing.

I think I'll keep a watch on it for now.

MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!:raritydespair:

...wait, two days later, and still only one comment? (My ride is here. I'll give a proper reply later.)

2274973
Classy. I approve. :twilightsmile:

Ahhh... you understand that a 'gelding' is a male horse that has been neutered, right? If you want to refer to a male horse that can can still... er... copulate... you need to call it a stallion.

2284971
Trust me, I am fully aware.

11335046
The author hasn't logged in since 2013, so almost certainly.

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