Chapter Three
You where woken up by the sound of two very loud voices. These two voice have been arguing back and fourth for quiet a while now.
"For fuck sake" you whisper to yourself
You lift your head of the pillow and look over at Lyra who is also awake
"How long has this argument been going on?" you ask
She shrugs... well you she did, the covered moved up and down so it must be a shrug.
"If this goes on any longer, I'm going to give them a peace of my mind" you say sitting up on your bed
Lyra follows your actions and also sits up on her bed and rubs her eyes
"I wouldn't" she says
"Why not?"
"Because you wouldn't want to be caught going into a dorm with two girl,you could be accused of being a pervert" she explains
"I honestly don't care, I want my sleep" you say hitting the bed
The voice continue to get louder and louder, even curse words where fired.
"That's it" you say getting out of bed and walking over to the door
You walk out the door and walk down the hallway towards to the sound of two people yelling
3....2....1
You burst open the door
"WILL YOU TWO SHUT UP. IT'S THREE FUCKING FIFTEENTH IN THE MORNING, SOME PEOPLE WANT TO SLEEP AND YOU'RE KEEPING THEM UP. SO DO US ALL A FAVOR AND SHUT YOUR GOD DAMN MOUTHS" you shout and then slam the door shut before one of the has anytime to respond
You walk back down the hallway to your dorm room. As you walk back into your dorm you notice that Lyra has already gone back to sleep and has a smile on her face
Heh, cute
You lay back down on your bed and drift of to sleep
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
You lift your head off the pillow and look over at the door. You're not sure if someones at the door or if it was sound you herd in your dream
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK
Defiantly wasn't form the dream
You get out of your bed and walk towards the door and open it
Standing on the other side of the door was Two girls
One girl was wearing a cyan tank top and some running shorts. She also wearing white shoes complete with rainbow leg warmers. The one thing that stuck out the most was her rainbow hair
The other girl had blond hair that was covered by a cowboy hat. She was wearing a white tee-shirt with a yellow jacket. the bottom half of her was cover by blue jeans and cow boy boots
"Who the hell do you think you are?" the rainbow haired girl asks
"Huh?"
"You think that you could juts walk into our dorm and yell at us" she says clearly annoyed
"I wasn't the one who was having a heated argument with my dorm mate about some random shit" you say defensively
"She was snoring" she says pointing to the blond hair girl
"Why is that worth an argument. You could of either, A: woken her up and tell her she was snoring. Or B: gotten some ear plugs"
The rainbow girl grabs your shirt, but your weren't intimidated by her. You don't get intimidated easily.
"Listen here new kid, I could make your school life a living hell if your not careful" she says then letting go of your shirt
"Go ahead, my school life has been a living hell so far" you raise your arm in a way that says 'Come at me bro... er.. sis'
with hmph and a flick of her hair she walks back to her dorm room
"I'm sorry about her" the blond hair girl say with a southern accent
"It's alright, I'm sure that shes not a bitch most of the time"
"I HERD THAT!" the rainbow haired girl yells from her dorm
"GOOD!" you yell back
"Well I'm Apple Jack" she say extending her hand
You tell her your name while shaking her hand
"It's nice ta meet ya" she say
"So I take it you're from the south"
"Well most of my family are. but I grew up in Ponyville" she explains
"Ponyville? I grew up there"
"APPLE JACK COME ON" the rainbow haired yells
"ALRIGHT HOLD YOU HORSES" Apple Jack yells back
She turns her head back to you
"I'll see ya around" she says then walking away
You nod then close the door. You walkover to your wardrobe and pull out some new socks, boxers, shirt and jeans. You get out of your shorts and vest and put on your new set of cloths.
Just as you buckle your belt Lyra and Bon Bon walk through the door. Lyra is holding two paper bags and Bon Bon is only holding one.
"It's about time you woke up" says Bon Bon
"Why?"
"Because it's nearly twelve thirty"
"Well I would of been up earlier if it wasn't for the two girls who where shouting last night" you say
"Wells that's Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash for ya'. They always argue over the little things" says Lyra with a shrug
"I assume that they came knocking?" ask Bon Bon raising an eyebrow
"Yeah, How did you know?"
"Because earlier when we where walking down the hallway while you where still asleep they asked us if you where awake"
"Oh"
"Here" Lyra say handing you one of the paper bags
"What is it?" you ask
"It's just a grill cheesed sandwich" she say while sitting on her bed
"Awesome, Thank you, I love you, It's like you read my mind" you say giving her a smile which for some reason causes her to blush. You take the bag and pull sandwich out take a bite out of it.
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Some Time Later
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You, Lyra and Bon Bon finish your breakfast/lunch and are just sitting around talking
Suddenly your phone starts to vibrate indicating that you have a message. You unlock your phone and read at the text message.
The message was from Mr. Heartstrings
Come to my office now please
You slip your phone into your pocket and get off your bed and walk towards the door
"Where are you going?" ask Lyra
"Got to go and meet your dad in is office" you say opening the door and walking out of the door
You walk down your hallway with your hands in your pockets. All of a sudden you feel a finger tap you on the should which cause you to jump and turn around and get into a really stupid self-defense pose.
You see that the person who taped you is a girl with two different types of blue in her hair. She wearing a white tee-shirt with the word wub wub on them and denim shorts. She covers her eye with big purple sun glasses.
"Hi..." you say getting out of your pose.
"You're that kid who was playing that guitar yesterday and the one who went into AppleJacks and Rainbows dorm and yelled at them right?" she ask
"Yeah" you say proudly
"I'm Vinyl Scratch" she say extending her hand
You shake her hand and tell her your name
"I just want to say two things, One: Thanks for shutting the two of them up or I wouldn't of gotten any sleep" she say
"No problem" you say with a little bow
"And number two: you totally kick ass on that guitar"
"Thanks... is that it?"
"Well I'm working on this music project back in my dorm. And I was just wondering if you could come in and record some guitar for me and maybe do a little singing as well" she shyly
You were about to respond when your phone starts to vibrate again. You pull out your phone to see that Mr Heartstrings sent you another message.
Get here now
"Sure love to but I really need to go now" you say in a hurry
"Give me your phone quickly" she say reaching into her pocket and pulling out her phone
You hand her your phone and she types your number into her phone, She hands back your phone
"I'll text you some time" she says then walks away
You turn around walk out of the hallway as fast as you could and run your way to Mr Heartstrings office because the last thing you want to do is upset Mr Heartstrings.
You finally make it to Mr Heartstrings office. You pretty much sprinted most of the way to the office but you still weren't tired out. You knock a couple of times on the door and wait. The door opens and Mr Heartstrings stands there with what looks like a disappointed expression.
"What toke you so long?" he ask in his big voice
"This girl vinyl scratch wanted my help on a projects she working on?" you say
"A college project?" he ask
you shrug
"Come in a take a seat" he say walking back to his desk
you follow him and take a seat in front of his desk. As soon as he sits down on his chair you say "I'm not in trouble am I? because if it was about the thing that happened last night it was only because I wanted to sleep", you pretty much said that senctance in one breath
How does that pink girl do that, my chest hurts
"Not at all, I just wanted to give you this" Mr Heartstrings says handing you a peace of paper
You give a confussed look, then a relieved look then take the paper
"It's a letter to give to your teachers about the typeatron" he continues, You give him a look like you don't know what he was talking about, "The device I gave you"
"Oh right" you say
"Now what was that you said about the thing that happened last night?" Mr Heartstrings asks
"......nothing" you say with a small smile
He chuckles to your comment "Okay you can go now"
You get up from your seat and walk out the office while putting the peace of paper in your pocket. You walk yourself back to your dorm
"HEY NEW FRIEND!" a happy voice calls out
You're not sure if the girl was talking to you or not so you continue walking. You then get a greeted by hug from behind. You look over your shoulder to see that pink haired girl was her cheek pressed by against your back. She finally let's go of you and spins you around to face her.
"Why did you ignore me?" she ask with a pout
"Aren't you friends with everyone in this college?" you ask
She nod her head rapidly
"I just thought that you where talking to some one else"
"You're the newest kid here, So your my NEWEST friend" she say giving you another rib crushing hug
"Good... to... know" you say slowly losing your power to breath
She lets go of you and you take a deep breath and cough with your hands on your knees
"What did you call me for?" you ask looking up at her and placing a hand on your chest
"I just wanted to say hi" she say with a smile
"Okay then..." you get back into your normal standing position and Pinkie just look at you with a smile "Hi"
"HI!" she say happily
There is a bit of a awkward silents between you to. You scratch the back of your head but she continues to smile at you
"Well... I'll see you around" you say
"Okay bye" she say and then skips away
Again you stand there wondering what happened
You open the door to your dorm room and walk in. You see that the dorm was empty and silent, the only thing you could here is the wind through the open window
I wonder where those two went of too
Your phone starts to vibrate again, you take the phone out of your pocket to see you have message.
The message reads
Turn Around
You turn around slowly, and then
"BOO"
"Nice try Lyra" you say
She take of her mask "Aww how did you know it was me?"
"For one, The text was from you and two I'm not scared easily" you say
"Really?" she says with a small smile
"Yeah, really" you say with a confidante nod
You then feel someone grab onto you and a loud scream come from behind you
"JESUS CHRIST!!!" you shout and run
But you loose your footing and trip. You head smacks on the door with force knocking you out.
You open you eye's slowly, your ears finally come into play and you start to hear a voice.
"Oh my god, were in deep shit" you hear Lyra say
You slowly lift your head up of the pillow and look around the room. You see Lyra pacing around the room with her hands on her head. You look around the room a bit more see that Bon Bon is no longer in the room, Lyra see's that you've woken up and he run towards you and gives you a hug
"IMSORRYIMSORRYIMSORRYIMSORRYIMSORRY-"
You cover Lyra's mouth before she and repast another word
"It's okay" you say
"NO! it's not okay we tried to scare you and it back fired and knocked you out cold" she say hugging you tighter
"Lyra, seriously it's okay, the noddle safe" you say patting her head
You hear a noise that apparently breaks your heart. Lyra lets out a little sob noise and you start to hug her tighter.
"Hey there no need to cry" you say in your most caring voice
"I thought you where going to get amnesia again" she says through her tears
You hug her even tighter place the bottom of your head onto the top of her head, and you start to rub her back trying to calm her down. The door to your dorm opens and Bon Bon walks in
She sees you that you're awaken and instantly looks down at the floor "I'm sorry" Bon Bon says
"It's okay, it was just a joke" you say still hugging Lyra and rubbing her head
Lyra finally stops crying and lets go of you and wipes some tears of her face.
"You okay?" you ask
Lyra nods her head and sits down next you and places her hands on her knees and sniffle every now and again. Bon Bon walks over to you and hands you an ice pack. You nod as a thanks. You hold the ice pack on the back of your head, the shiver at first but then it starts to feel good.
"So how long was I out?" you ask
"Ten minutes" Bon Bon says
You might want to look over this chapter you can see the entire url besides Rainbows.
"sigh" You, good sir, are a pain. Thankfully, I am not (usually).
Advice time!
-Learn to use the period. Seriously, I found TWO periods in this thing--that is NOT acceptable.
-Describe things and people. I don't want to see a picture, I want to see your words.
-Don't misuse words.
-Get an editor, or a prereader. Ideally both.
-Look up online (or pay attention in english class) how to use grammar.
This story only blows chunks because of really basic stuff. Fix it up, and you got this.
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Thanks for the advice.
on the fourth point you made, you obviously didn't read the description. I have an editor for this.
SO basically it's his fault not mine
2243744 Oh well, I messed up! Look at all the bucks I give:____________________________: :D (I still have school taking up time so.....)
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Meh I don't care much for this story anyway
2244033 That is no good attitude mister!
I have some advice of my own. This chapter looks like a looooooong arse song. Not in words but in design. there are no paragraphs! NONE! I'm not trying to sound stupid about it but, stories need to appeal to the eye, paragraphs adhere to that need. Good chapter over all, a little rushed maybe, coulda been designed better but over all... 7 of 10 moustaches
Looks Like I Have To Find A Good Time-Wasting Medium So I Could Easily Wait For The Next Chapter.........*Snaps Finger* CRIKEN