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The Princess Rarity


Quirky teenage girl who writes about cartoons & has an obsession with sparkly things & cute dorks. Goes through life following by Dr. Seuss's wise words; "You have to be odd to be number one."

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Words on a piece of paper can't compare to the ones we actually say.


Note - this was previously titled Home Is Where The Heart Lies, but it was changed, due to future plans. Also, many thanks go to Scribbler for making a wonderful reading of this!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 33 )

oh come on... why do you have to give me feels like this? :fluttercry:

I hate you now. My day was going pretty damn good 'til this. Thanks.:fluttercry: Why so many sad OTP stories this month? You, Josh, Jocelyn, me, lots of others. Why? It hurts me.:fluttershbad:

2151995 ... Y'know, I honestly have no idea.
Sorry to make you cry!

2152003

'Tis okay. I forgive you (but not Josh. He can dine in hell).:pinkiesmile:

This is beautiful:raritycry:

Oh, my. This is... really depressing. :rainbowderp:
Very well-written, though, I give you that.

That was very very sad... Really. Why would you do that? :fluttershysad:

2152017
Heeeeeeeeeey!

whoa, another? nice, again, will read later XD

2152051 Because I'm evil, lol. And was really bored.

Thumbs up for you! Nicely done. Only thing I might have changed is lengthening Vinyl's letter a bit. Give her a line or two to the effect of, "I don't want to hurt you, it's better if it ends this way." That, and perhaps rework the doctor's letter at the end; after a month you think they'd have at least some idea what happened and when. Good sadfic for you, TPR.

2152261 Yeah, like I said, I just wrote this cuz I was bored and had feels, but thanks a lot for your tips (and the comment, of course)! :twilightsmile:

This left me with a question: were I in similar straits, would I blow someone off as tersely as Vinyl does here?

I don't think I could. But I can't fault Vinyl for doing it her way: she obviously didn't want Octavia to worry about her, and I'd really hate to have somepony worried about me.

Wow. Just wow.

..................Damn, that, that was honestly tragic.......shit, why the buck do the Gods and Death always have to take the ones we love away from us...what the buck is wrong with them:fluttercry: Shit, now that would make me depressed....wow.

One question well more as of two......umm, one: would it not seriously hurt an Earth Pony's neck to have to write with their mouth?

And two: How does an Earth Pony use a phone if they have such small numbers? I can underestand pegasus and unicorns but I'm so confused on how Earth Ponies does it......damn, this is strange and depressing, very great job:twilightsmile:

Niiiiice
Although you are the most evil of writers to do this to us, I really did enjoy the story
Not sure if a sequel would work with or destroy the awesomeness of this chapter

why would you do that, OP?...:applecry:

pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2503-ea6.gif THAT WAS TERRIBLE! Beautifully written, BUT TERRIBLE!!!

2197428 So did you like it or not? Sorry I made you cry though.

2197430
I really don't even know. on a more critical stand point, the letter from the hospital seemed a little cheap... but other than that it was so well written. On the other hand it just seems so pointlessly cruel to the characters... like "what kind of sadist are you??" but then I thought the same thing of Shakespeare when I read Romeo and Juliet...
Let's just say I liked it and leave it at that.

this is beyond sad, the letters that she wrote where very heart warming then she finds out that her bestest most best friend in the world has died and the last words her friend ever said to her is to stop sending letters well you get:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: 19 crying fluttershys because of how sad i am from this and one:moustache: because it was very well written

Everyone hero in They Own Way,Sorry you title remind of something

Ouch... I was getting a horrible feeling when there was no replies... and I want to know why Vinyl Scratch asked her to stop sending her letters... didn't want Tavi to waste her time, when she knew she was dying?

You dirty, dirty thing, you. I'm such a sucker for letters, so curse you.:pinkiehappy:

why do all the letter stories have to be so sad :( im crying ...

Hi there. I hope you don't mind, but I liked this fic so much I have put together an audio version on YouTube.

3 full days of utter tears right here. :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

PresentPerfect
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So is the punchline that not only is Vinyl dead, but she never loved Octavia? It's hard to interpret that penultimate letter without any context. I wouldn't blame her, given how much disdain Octavia has for her music.

heard scribbler's reading.

jeez, that ending. it hurt

But I thought Rarijack (or TwiLuna) was your OTP? :applejackconfused:

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