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Just a wannabe screenwriter who happens to have a fascination with pony fanfiction.
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- Oh, dear; another look at the burdens of being a Companion; since she has a fair idea of what followed Victor and how important Twi is in stopping it, somepony's normally good mood is a trifle sour right now.
this is gettin interestin
Despite knowing almost nothing about Killing Floor, this has been really fun to read so far. I'm eager to see all the things that are going to go wrong now that these two worlds have collided. It'll also be interesting to see how Doctor Whooves fits into all of this.
Perhaps now that we're delving into the actual content of the story, pacing will become a little quicker. Long descriptions are sometimes unavoidable though, so it's not anything bad. It can take a while to develop a unique style, but the more you write, the more defined your style will become. If you want more practice, just write tiny tidbits that you'd like to see in your story ahead of time.
All in all, keep up the great work!
(I hope I didn't jump around too much in my review)
Well, just from the description I am now prepared for somepony to scream FLESH POUND and cause the entire group to panic and screw up massively. It always happens, I tell you.
Well, I'm sure okay with this story so far! I'm not really sure what the crossover's with (other than the fact it takes place in the portal/half life universes) but the entire thing pretty much covers all my check boxes on what makes me love a story.
The chapters have both quality and length, making it so that no matter how long I have to wait for a chapter I'll feel pretty satisfied reading the whole thing over the course of maybe ten to fifteen, possibly even thirty minutes.
You bring some pretty nice character development to the table that I haven't really seen before, like the way Rarity sees things a bit differently than anypony else.
It's also left in quite a bit of suspense, so I'm really looking forward to the next chap!
And... well, it's an awesome crossover. Need I say more?
Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Oh boy, I don't like not responding to comments, so I'll get to it!
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Yeah, being a companion isn't easy at all. It'll still give me some fun ideas to play around with!
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I'm glad you find it interesting!
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Thanks for the advice! I guess I'll have to wait and see how my style changes as the story progresses.
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Heh, its true. All it takes is a FP to ruin a good run.
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It makes me happy that my story is well received (so far)! To be honest, chapter 2 was going to be a lot longer than this, but then I realized I was already at 23 pages on Google Docs, so I ended it there. Also, to clarify, this is crossing over MLP with the game Killing Floor. Aperture science is mentioned since there is an official Portal map in the game, so I went with that single plot element.
Anyways, its comments that get me inspired, chapter 3 is in the works as we speak!
Doom: Pony edition. I like it! Can't wait to read more.
This is going to be epic. I'll be watching the entire way.
I'm really concerned with how Fluttershy, of all of them will handle this. The violence and gore I know this is going to have might just be enough to break the poor, timid pegasus.
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I must reiterate that this is a Killing Floor crossover, though I don't blame you for not seeing that, Killing Floor isn't that well known of a game. Regardless, I'm glad that you like it
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Thank you very kindly for the watch :D
As for Fluttershy, well, I have plans in store for her. I'm not going to go into details, but it'll be something. >:)
I love this very much! Hope to read more!
Awesome fic! I'm DYING for the next chapter!!
I LOVE THIS
(but a doom crossover doesn't sound bad)
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With any luck, I'll be getting the next chapter out in a timely manner (I had to cut out part of the original chapter 3, otherwise it would've stretched into 20k words by the time I was done), so long as school doesn't keep me tied down, that is.
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Yeah, it really doesn't sound like a bad idea. Especially since the Doom storyline is a million times less ambiguous than Killing Floor's storyline.
More please!
HOLD ON A TICK I'M RELOADIN!
Finally a killing floor mlp crossover.
Doctor hooves? rated down and unfavorited.
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School projects and junk are rampant this time of year, but hopefully I can get the next chapter out soon :)
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...Well, I'm sorry you feel that way. Even though his role in this story had little to no time to develop or anything, and his picture is in the description to begin with. Oh well, it's your opinion, and you're free to prematurely rate down and unfavorite at the drop of a pin.
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u mad
"P.S. Pinkie Pie says hi" made me smile.
I read the first three chapters and really enjoyed them. Please update soon.
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The school assignments that flooded me lately are going away. I still have some things to do, but hopefully I can now get onto more writing. I've gotten out of this slump I tend to get myself into after submitting a chapter, so things should start to pick up over here.
Spike reached into what could vaguely be called his pockets and pulled out a special paper, a quill, and some ink. “I’m always ready to write whenever, Twilight!”
I loled here..
"P.S. Pinkie Pie says hi"
I loved these parts whilst reading x3
Its raining Money!
Please keep up the good work and updates coming
Hope 2 see the good Doctor Dave
ps. Princess Celestia sound kind of irresponsible by sending just them(mane 6) 2 another dimension instead of at least send with them 2 or 3 trusted soldiers. Hell even Luna could provide at least one of his own guards.
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Good to hear you enjoyed this story :)
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Well, chapter 4 is in the proofreading process (I send new chapters to a few friends for concept issues, then go to a ponychan thread on /fic/ for further analysis.). Once that is completed, and I make the image for chapter 4, I will post here asap. Also, about your comment on Celestia's actions. Let me tell you that I hate a lazy Celestia more than anything in pony fanfiction. All I will say is that everything happens for a reason, I have planned out a lot of this story's events way ahead of time.
Also, at the risk of sounding stupid, who's Doctor Dave?
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Doctor Dave is the Steam Punk Medic Character of the "SteamPunk Dlc Character pack" 4 Killing Floor
No one thought David would make a good doctor, which is why he was rejected by every medical school in the country. Imagine his surprise and delight when the Horzine mutant problem erupted, allowing any lunatic with a scalpel and some bandages to call themselves a medic. David now roams the streets, helping the wounded and vanquishing the undead – though sometimes he gets the two a bit mixed up.
Ah....this Ditzy hasn't encountered the Doctor yet.
Been waiting for this story to update! Great!
FINALLY A CROSSOVER OF MLP AND KF
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It's funny how time travel works, huh?
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You're telling me. I wanted this chapter released a while ago, but getting the story proofread proved to be a bit of a lengthy task. Still, the semester ended for me, so hopefully I can get out a couple more chapters before school resumes.
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Yeah, I felt like this crossover was a bit overdue. I hope you enjoy(ed) it!
*They cross the portal*
Patriarch "Stay there, I'll make this quick"
Still Awesome work please keep up the good work
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Well now, it wouldn't be any fun to just end it like that, now would it?
First TF2, then L4D, now I find a KF crossover, I LOVE THIS SITE!
I knew the chapter would end right as they crossed, but I was still sad when it did, oh well, at least it's all action from here on out
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Yep, next chapter is where the story gets interesting.
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Sorry but it remind me of something that happen 2 me and I find it funny.
based on a true story: I join at the last second (01 seconds left) in biotics lab final wave, I was ether a commando or a support level 3, the Patriarch makes his appearance right in front of me and shoots the crap out of me at the same time, by the time I could move I was dead
Wow! What a read. Here it is, 2 in the morning and I just finished it. Nicely done, though the fact you haven't updated this in a while gives me the fear that you abandoned it.
Well, this was so good that I just might read it again. Good job and keep up the good work.
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No no no, I would never dream of abandoning this story, trust me. In fact, I'm going to make a blog post explaining the current state of things. I'm not dropping this story, no way. Chapters usually take me a bit, what with plot progression, proofreading, and creating a chapter image. Though I'd like to think these chapters are worth the wait. Also, thanks for the compliments!
96233 Thank goodness! I can now wake up to a worry free cup of coffee. Moustache Spike is pleased!
Dosh! There I said it.
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Oh, there'll be lods of emone soon.
i fell this has to be done
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I DEMAND MOAR!!!!!!
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I don't know who you are, but I already like you.
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I'm working on it sir, I really am. I just gotta work on those revisions of mine.
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awesome!!!!!
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I know it's just SO hard to wait! Such a good story, yours was a major factor into what made me get into MLP to begin with!
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Wait, what? Really? That's pretty cool to hear!
Also, (I reeeeeeeally don't want to sound like I'm begging or anything, I hate when writers insist on needing watchers and the like) if you want to keep up with this story, the good ol' track button is at the top. Just so you don't forget and then wonder where the story could've gone off to.
237820 Not a problem at all man!
Can i Pweeeeeaaaaassseee Get Moar?
Pinkie
Please?
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Well, the chapter is being proofread by others atm, and I'm working on the image for chapter 5, so very soon there will be more!
Achievement Get: Booooooomer!!! 20 Achievement Points: Get covered in bloat bile.
Sweet chapter man! I really like it when the reality of a situation hits a character in a story, and you did it fantasically here. I'm waiting to see if Mr. Foster and DJ Skully are introduced
Those two are so badass. And I think the delay was well worth the outcome.