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LittleStrongheartNyx


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30 years have passed since Twilight's coronation and Discord's reformation. 31 years have gone by since Nyx's birth. The black alicorn has become a hero all this time, thank to all the friendships she has made.

A new age approaches as Nyx is told of a rumor that a spell from Equestria's founding may save a kind from eternal suffering. To do that, she must set of on a quest to understand and gain enough power to perform it.

But the kind she is hoping to save has counteracting ideas...


I recommend Reading Jussonic's stories to understand some things

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

You don't need any of those footnotes.

Like. At all.

The footnotes should have been worked into the story instead. All those *s kinda make it hard to read.

advise rewriting, when describing the sky blue stallion you said "shit" when you meant "shirt"

i like Nyx, don't understand why so many hate her, but i am interested in this fic, would like to see how it turns out

Hmmm, there need to be a natural follow in this story so it's easier to understand.

Sooo, any chance of getting a continue on this story?

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