Looking for a way to give her reading ability a boost, Twilight's new spell is interrupted by a certain rainbow pegasus, causing it to backfire in an unexpected but hilarious way.
Looking for a way to give her reading ability a boost, Twilight's new spell is interrupted by a certain rainbow pegasus, causing it to backfire in an unexpected but hilarious way.
My first pony fic, so don't be *too* mean with criticism.
It was just a silly idea that popped into my head, hope you all like it.
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Huh, fun fic. I could see something like this becoming an episode. Good job!
Brilliant! Always great to see original material. And yes, I did read the jeopardy sections in Alex Trebek's voice
For a first fic, not too shabby, I must say. 4.5/5... crud, mouse slipped. Ah well. Enjoy the extra half star
I say that's way more than twenty percent smarter. Good job! Btw may I know what the crossover was with?
good but i didn't like the ending
still good thought
This was a great read, though I would think Celestia would be a little sad knowing her own student doesn't know her full name.
Wait..... I'm not surprised
Good fic, i can really see this as an episode
Believable.
Seems like this could actually make an episode, changing some of the terminology of course.
But as a fanfic, this is really well done.
"...our contestants will have 30 seconds to bit up to double their points..."
'Bid' or 'bet'.
It's good but I found it very annoying that you did the whole thing in the present tense.
That was great.
I'd love to see more from you
Wow, such a great response! Thanks everyone! It was a silly idea that just popped into my head and I decided to roll with it. Glad you all enjoyed it.
165959 Why did you find it annoying?
Love it so far, but you have to remember to stay with past-tense or present tense. One or the other; most third person stories are properly written as past tense.
Other than that, I'm enjoying this so far.
So, how did Dash know Celestia's full name, if it wasn't in any of Twilight's books?
Also, no 'Potent Potions' category?
Words cannot express how criminally underrated this is
I wanted Rainbow Dash to keep the smart spell. This kinda reminds me of the Ellen Degenerous energy Bill Nigh the Science Guy ride at Disney world. It would have been 20% cooler if Twilight had more of a break down, but it was enjoyable (anymore, and this simple act turns into spam)
I was expecting PS. How come I don't know my teachers/mentor's name? Interesting concept, fun fic, and Derpy won.
Woo! Upvote #42!
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The present tense was an unusual narrative choice.
Also, my read is that RD threw the game at the end.
Really nice story, but there's a recurring problem you may want to fix. There are several times where you forgot to add an apostrophe. Here's some examples.
Also, there's one other thing you may want to fix.
That should be "add".
Should I be laughing or concerned?
Pfft
Oh Pinkie, you so silly.
That's a cursed image, I genuinely find that disturbing, somehow.