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All at once? Wow.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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You're right, Skeet; that is a bit overwhelming...
Totally awesome story. But now i need a happy story, since i'm reading way too much sadstuff
..
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36k? I've seen worse.
~Skeeter The Lurker
DAMN. Hell of a start!
~Skeeter The Lurker
3161342 I'm aware. I was one of the people that told him to do that. He just forgot to change it to incomplete when he unpublished them.
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A number of us in a group managed to convince him to remove the others... For now.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Damn, looks like Dash is gonna get 'cock blocked' nonstop!
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Oh, did not know that, sorry about that.
Guess i will just have to wait for the chapters to return.
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S'all good. Looks to be a good fic, though, yeah?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Nice Chapter!
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Well i liked what i have read so far, so i think it will turn out to be an good fic.
Fantastic fic, but do I even want to know how/when that tragedy tag is gonna come in? I'm not really looking forward to that..
You got some more italics malfunctions. Starts soon after Rainbow Dash is left alone with Twilight while the rest of the mane 6 get ready to leave for Canterlot. It lasts until the end of the Daring Do segment, although I'm sure the Daring Do segment itself was supposed to be in italics. Other than that, good show! I'm enjoying it quite a bit so far.
Oh gosh, this is going to rain heartache upon us, isn't it. I'll go get some tissues.
There better be some happy TwiDash at the end of this or I will make this
seem SANE!
I love it! Oh my god, I love it!
Just for the hell of it.
Vonderful.
Aw, Sad & AU tags added; who knows where this could be headed
.......It seems to be snowing in hell tonight.
Well, at least there's a good excuse for the mane six to be blatantly ignorant of Spike's existence this time around. He doesn't exist.
DAMN!
Heck of an opening! So far, definitely worth the wait.
THIS BETTER NOT BE A TRAGEDY FIC!
I'm just waiting, enjoying these chapters, and looking for the inevitable point where everything goes down the tube...
Why must you do this to me?!
Smoooth, Twilight.
Smooth.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Aaaaand now we're reaching the point where I'm guessing it all goes downhill and stays there for an undetermined amount of time.
I can see Rainbow's reaction here. One does tend to get rather snappy and fly off the handle when going through something like that. And I love Twilight's reaction. When you can't vanish away from everyone, opt for door #2. Throw everyone else out.
Blundy... Don't do this to me... You promised!
Well then... Twilight seems to be overreacting slightly here, in my opinion. Regardless of what Rainbow Dash said to her and how she feels back, Twilight would still try to remain friends, in my mind, and try to resolve it before anything worse happens. Maybe there's further explanation later in the story, though. We'll see. Good chapter, though.
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There is. A major plot point revolves around her kind of zoning out for a while. If you noticed, she kinda ignored everyone, not just Rainbow.
Hmmm... Twilight seems to be in a state of shock, while Rainbow is in fury.
Hope they figure it out soon...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Didn't realize how appropriate this song fitted with this chapter until I'd finished it.
And so we move along...
Now they realize they were twits, and move to the figure shit out phase...
~Skeeter The Lurker
I just know that storm is gonna do something, and I also have a feeling that what ever it does brings the cause for the tragedy tag... God please tell me I'm wrong.
I'm torn between pitying Rainbow and wanting to scold her for losing it with everyone... and I'm torn between being mad at Twilight for ignoring her after all that and feeling for her since I can guess what's coming...
...
I need a cookie.
Fitting song is fitting.
Truly I love sitting down and reading this series of stories.
Aaaaand here comes the part I was dreading throughout the entire fic
The part where everything finally hits the fan is here! WOO!
Also quite possibly my favourite line that you've ever written.
I knew what I was getting into with that tragedy tag, but ouch. That's just... ouch. Though I see it's still incomplete (unless you just forgot to update it) so there's some hope of something happening, but then it wouldn't really be tragedy would it? I don't know, but I'm hoping for at least one more chapter. Though that chapter's probably just gonna make me even more sad, it would be nice.
Anyway, for what it's worth, good chapter.
Oh jeez. That's really all I've got for a response for this chapter. Considering the tragedy tag I shoulda seen this coming, but still.
Oh jeez.
Well done. Did you forget to change it to "complete" though with this chapter?
...
Oh jeez.
Edit: Nevermind, forgot about the epilogue. (Oh jeez).
You horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible horrible person you!
But I saw it coming as soon as she threw the damned book through the wall. That was a humongous bit of foreshadowing.
Overall, very well done. I really want to read the epilogue now, but I already know it won't be making this tragedy any happier.
Well shit...
...
...
I...
Shit...
Complete? Talking about cliffhanger
I demand an epilogue. I would like to know how the rest of the Mane 6 reacted! It would look something like this
