When the Cutie Mark Crusaders and Spike are kidnapped the Mane 6 go to rescue their sisters and favourite purple dragon but soon find that it may be harder then they first thought. Now with their sisters and dragon being held captive the Mane 6 must find some-pony who can rescue their sisters (And Dragon). One certain stallion comes to mind but he is a little more than reluctant to help them
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My feature sense is tingling...
Just read.
HO.
LEE.
SH!T-SUM.
This shall be interesting... Tracking.
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Okay, in all seriousness, this fic needs some work. For starters, whenever a character speaks, they need a new paragraph. You don't know how confusing it is when different characters are speaking in the same paragraph. Second, while this is minor, there are a lot of spelling mistakes. If you have Google Chrome, it'll correct them for you.
Interesting idea, just needs some work.
2135953 yeah your right on the whole spelling mistake thing... (sighs) I'm just glad that microsoft word starter highlights the stuff I spelt incorectly
MOTHER CENSORING CLIFFHANGERS!
aw cool just walkin' havin a grand old fuckin' time-OH SHIT ASSHOLES AND NIGGAS COME OUT THE CUT WITH GUNZ N' SHIT HITTIN' PEOPLE IN THE FUCKIN' HEAD AND SHIT, OH MY FUCKIN GOSH THEIR CURSING LIKE REAL FUCKIN PEOPLE AND SHIT IS GETTING REAL AND-
wait a second
<.<
>.>
Tracked
also Spike: the guy who "should've stayed home today"
1. Best OC ever created
2. I wouldn't say MJ is stereotype, he's missing a few aspects of that, all of which I am too lazy to list.
Good story so far, keep it up.
the stallion....named.....daffodil.
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GRATUITOUS BAD@$$ERY!
the coolest pony alive right now = Metal Jacket
I was skeptical at first but that explosion......HELL FUCKIN YES
Niiiice. I enjoyed the part of bitchy rarity
2163392 Yeah, I was so glad when Celestia told her off. I was like "Bitch got told"
You have been watching your sci fi young Padawan. And I love the cliff hanger!
A Bible? In Equestria?
Jesus Is Best Pony
This is now in my top 10 favorite fics.
2164153 Oh thanks, man I'm loving the action stories. I was going to write a romance story after this but now I'm thinking about just writing another action story. Well sort of, it's more along the lines of street racing
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Either way, my watch is now yours.
2164410 why thank you my dear sir/ma'am. Have a moustache for your kindness
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(Male)
Your moustache is well recieved.
10. The Love Of A Dragon
9. Tears In The Snow
8. Past Sins
7. Chaotic Love, Lovely Chaos
6. Dark Wanderings
5. My Little Pony: The Adventures of Vaati
4. My Little Dashie
3. Fallout Equestria
2. The Unforgiven
1. Just Dropping In
2173350 yes... I am in the top two of someones top ten list, (Raises hand for high-five)
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*High fives*
Aaaaaaand...Comando referance...nice
Nice. But if you put a part like the Derpy as the kid then please have some build up.
Don't just bring it up out of the blue.
Never the less I loved this story.
I smirked “Stick around”
I see what you did there Predator reference any who
Im a huge fan of your work and just want to say great work mate great work
2400565 Oh thanks... yeah I liked this story. Sometime, when I get time I want to go back and relive all these stories I've written. Anyway I'm rambling again, thanks man, I always like to hear from good people yah know
If this guys is so bad then why is he the only one who can get the crusaders and Spike back?
Awesome story!!!! Though one of the shortest Ive read but still good reading