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Harmony The Cat


Greetings, We are Diantha Harmony, an amateur writer. In the times We do not write, We enjoy entertainment systems.

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Welcome to Twilight Sparkle's mind. A place full of thoughts and feelings. A place where she takes refuge during hard times. A place of tranquility that keeps her at peace. A place of concepts and ideas. A place where she stores memories of her friendships.


Author's Note: We will not be uploading the chapters in order. They shall be published whenever We are inspired.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 24 )

we doth enjoy this piece of literature muchly

tell us...dost thou plan to taketh this off hiatus at some point in the days to come?

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We thanketh thee.
Although, We do not understand what thou means by that (We had meant to set it as Incomplete instead of On Haitus). If thou means that this series will ever end, our reply is not quite. It much depends on how much inspiration we receive, and that applies to the length of this series.

((In other words, yes, it'll most likely end, but hopefully I'll have enough inspiration to keep it going for quite a while))

usually when a story is marked "on hiatus" it meas the story has entered development hell and won't get updated for ages because the writer isn't working on it at the present time

complete - exactly what it says on the tin
incomplete - not finished but being worked on
on hiatus - not finished and not being worked on

i don't want this to go on hiatus, it's looking good
i want moar chapters:flutterrage:
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Haha, We sincerely apologize for setting the story as "On Haitus". We did not realize the meaning until now. :twilightsheepish: Online dictionary services are rather inadequate when it comes to definitions, so thank you for the clarification. And thou shall get their "moar", soon, an idea for another chapter has popped up in our head rather recently. :twilightsmile:

I hope so, they'd be very boring otherwise. Applejack is the first is the first to pull away.

You wrote pull away twice. Whoopsie

Otherwise I love it, cant wait to see more! :pinkiehappy:

I haven't read a good Twijack fic. There's just some holes in the plot and put a bit more detail. But I like it and will keep my eye on it. Thumbs Up for me!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:
P.s. maybe you can read my story my dayin Ponyville

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Oh dear, thank thee very much for catching that hun. We are glad that thou enjoys our work. :twilightsmile:

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Oh yes, the holes, about that, We have not received much inspiration for a way for the Elements of Magic and Honesty to get together, though, worry not! We shall have them, hopefully, soon.

wtf wtf wtf wtf WTF WTF WTF WTF :applecry::applejackconfused::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

Anypony would find it a lot to take in, but you deserve it Twilight Sparkle. You have learned the magic of friendship which gives you the right of the authority, the Princess of Magic. Also, about your new duties. I want you to remain in Ponyville and expand your knowledge in friendship and magic."

that better happen come season 4:twilightangry2:
cause if it doesn't:twilightangry2:
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Based on the MLP forums, Equestria Daily, Derpy Hooves News and many other sites. Daniel Ingram has stated that there will be 91 episodes. With the end of Season 3, totaling up to 65 episodes, the only logical way for there to be 91 episodes, is if there happens to be another 26 episode-long season.

We pray that this be true, and wish to never see the end of the episodes. The Element of Generosity would definately be furious if she did not have more screen time.

So finished up two letters and figured I could spare a moment to read this (It isn't all that long) and I wasn't disappointed.

I'll start with criticism to get that out of the way. I noticed a few minor mechanic problems- comma splices, minor redundancies, spelling and miscellaneous punctuation- but that's to be expected, no one is a perfect writer, I have trouble with this things.

Formatting could use a bit of polish, there are a few paragraph breaks where there needn't be as well as areas where they should be included.

Content wise I think you could delve more into emotions alongside thoughts. IE using more fear and despair at the thought of Applejack leaving.


On the bright side, I read the entire thing. There's been a lot of stuff that I've read where I get a paragraph or two in and I just quit. as I said I'm not much of a reader. Your writing was engaging enough for me to read the entire thing. I found myself interested in how you portrayed the characters and their scenarios. It was genuinely a pleasure to read.

There is one thing I particularly enjoyed that you did that many writers seem to forget: thought takes time. Many authors make thought seem instantaneous, that it all happens in a second, when in actuality it does take time to think.

Also I enjoyed the TwiJack, you don't see much of it, but I think you pull it off nicely.

In short, no it isn't perfect, but the little errors don't really detract from the story in any way. A genuinely good read.

um.... wow this is beautiful :heart: so much heartfelt feelings that mine may explode! :raritywink:

Looks good, nice work. I enjoyed this chapter :pinkiehappy:

My only real complaint is that Twilight refered to Spike as her pet.

Hmm, this is the first time i've seen Twilight and Marylight in the same character tags.

Question: What is your favorite book or poem written in the eighth century?

Question: What is your favorite book or poem written in the eighth century?

I have to admit to being a little confused by this chapter. Last chapter Twilight was trying to decide between Rainbow Dash and Applejack. Then this chapter she's suddenly with Applejack, and already having her first tiff with her. What happened? Why did Twilight chose Applejack? It feels like I missed a huge chunk of the story

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Well, you see, the story does not follow a certain sequence. As it says in the Author's note, the chapters come along as We are inspired. Though, We shall soon get back to filling the plot-hole, there has been major difficulties with our school and education lately. :rainbowwild:

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