I gotta say, reading this after getting the good ending was painful since I knew what was coming. This is definitely my favorite story of yours, good job.

This was exactly what I expected to happen
Honestly I choose the non-cheating way, yet I simply had to read this one
Will read the good ending now
-Glassed

I totally saw this coming. I think I saw it in a movie once.

Saw it coming. Great story, though. Poor Lotus.

Best moral I've read in a fic... That I've read anywhere. You sir, will get my stars.

Excellent moral. Simply excellent. You sir, are a gentleman and a scholar.

"...watching as her love for you slips away."

Although this is the bad ending, I still think it's worth reading as the good ending. Because in the good ending, you didn't mention that backstory and why they do this test. If the backstory was mentioned in the good ending, this would just be "the bad ending". But because it's not mentioned, this qualifies as having qualities that the good ending doesn't possess. Personally, I wouldn't liked to hear that backstory in the good ending.

Mr. Crowley, what goes on in your head?

P.S. Could I have your permission to make a prequel to this story based on Lotus' first (failed) love interest? I'll probably even have it lead up to when...uh...when "I" defended her in that flashback.

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If you feel it will add more to the overall story, go right ahead, write what you like. Might be interesting!

Chivalry rules, being a cheating jerk drools.

well saw this ppffpfpf coming sry been reading triple x well now to read the next ending

yeah this was scary after picking the good ending first cuz i really knew what was coming. Glad I picked the good story first

The way I see it, if they honestly have the need to "test you" then fuck em', I'd walk out of there without an ounce of regret knowing it was a goddamn rigged test to begin with.

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Considering the fact that you wound up with the bad ending, I would say that you...
*sunglasses*
Scrudeup.

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If only chivalry really paid... but this is more about loyalty. That pays back.

Lols at this ending, man, i'd want to get beat up by a girl if I actually chose this ending, I think it would make me feel better.

Yay! A story that actually has a point to it other than to be read!

I deserved that

You good sir are setting an amazing example for people to be an and be faithful to their girlfriends. also i choose the Lotus choice first

204137 Hey, Crowley. I hope you don't mind, but I'm making my own version, or sequel to this story. It sets on the Titanic, the Equestrian made one.

Annnnnnnd, since you don't tell the character's name on this story, I decided to use my OC.

I hope you don't mind mate. Also, this chapter gets me fantasizing about this happening one day if I were to go to Equestria. Or...something...

this is what happens when you let the bitches bite you(i got the good ending first) Still in the whole chapter i had a big razional and almost hypocrite explaniation for the cheating. just ask if you wanna know about it

I actually chose the good ending first, but, since this is crowley's story, I read this afterwards.

I knew it. It never works anyways. A demotivational I saw earlier shows this:
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And Aloe asked if you were sure.

164994 totally agreed! :)

But...If Katawa Shoujo taught me anything, you can easily cheat on your girlfriend and she'll never know!
Then again you have to cheat on her with a lesbian, so...

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And if Katawa Shoujo taught me anything... it's that legless girls can run surprisingly fast.

(G.I.Joe reference)
Now we know.

And knowing is half the battle LOL

i knew what would happen because good end and ouch dude! if someone asks if you are sure you want to cheat on someone say no! and why would you cheat in the fist place cause thats just rude 5/5 spikes for crowley

Ok, I, being a sensible guy, chose the non-cheating way. But after reading that, i decided to read ch 3. Gotta say, i felt every slap, felt the pain of the heartbreak. and i also gotta say. job well done!!!

I was kind of expecting this happen, an am glad it did. "I" didn't want to be a pony like this!!!

CROWLEY....STOP GIVING ME SO MANY FETISHES.I HAVE SO MANY ALREADY.

Was reading the Lotus ending, but decided I'd get this one out of the way after the first few paragraphs and I'm glad I did. I'm disgusted with this pony, to be honest. But now that I've read the bad ending let's resume the good ending and restore my good mood.

well... that was... horrifying; the first paragraph or so I felt guilty. Saying I was up to it felt so wrong and in so many ways that when she said are you sure about this? All I could think of was, "No, I shouldn't be doing this!" thank lord I took the other ending otherwise this one would hurt like a boss

I deserved that...

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Eeyup.

good thing that I chose the other ending before this. I'm loyal! Curiosity got the best of me to see this ending tho.

3619775same here, I wanted to see if it was still a trap.

I read the other ending first (Yay, I'm a good person). anywho ,I was just curious about how this part ended, and boy am I glad i chose the other one.

I was just beginning to read this chapter, and it was already becoming painful to read. I'm lucky I chose Choice: Lotus first before reading this one.

I find Lotus quite attractive, and I choose to follow my morals.

Well done on this fanfic, Crowley!

Congrats. You made it so that there was some kind of moral choice.

How boring.

Honestly I am just hitting the next chapter button here. As soon as we got the slap I started scrolling to see if there was any weird domination thing. Nope.

What a wasted opportunity.

Damn.

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How misleading