A young man finds himself absorbed by the MLP franchise in a way he would never have believed.
Unable to return to his own world, he's forced to make the best of his new life in Equestria.
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rather interesting story, though that filly's name is rather odd
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Hee, I know. ^-^;;
The idea behind it was that Trixie didn't like to over-complicate things, was too bothered by other things anyway, and really didn't know what else to call her. So Fuu was the easiest name she could come up with.
hey, this is actually pretty decent.
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Enjoying it pretty well, I NEED to get to sleep, but I'll stop back by and give it a proper going over.
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I have a roadmap for it, but I don't release any information about where the story is going. ;)
Nightmare on 'Mane' street? Really?
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DI7YDIaU-4I
I am intrigued, always gotta love the rule 63. Anyway, ship with Trixie? yes or no?
I take back what I said about shipping.... That would end horribly. Anyway, still good, you should give her a better name though and maybe a description of how she looks (Unless I just missed that), so yeah, this is good.
I see one problem here, she (Fuu) should know at least high-school level math, as well as other subjects. He used to be 20 or so, yes? Which means he (She) should still have all that knowledge of literature, science, and math. So uh, yeah.
While the story is good (so far) there is several huge flaws. He was kidnapped and he saved her. She treats him like a slave he seems to take it in stride.
You hit Trixie while backing up on your own driveway?! TWICE?!
Remind me to stay very far away from this character if she ever gets behind a wheel again.
Only "southern" and "bronx" accents use additive negatives, that I know of. Sweetie speaks with ordinary Chicago English, with maybe a touch of Philadelphia, so she'll use multiplicative negatives. They cancel out.
When Sweetie says "She doesn't trust me with nothing" it means "She does trust me with something." When Apple Bloom says "She don't trust you with nothing" it means "She really does not trust you with anything."
Maybe I'm just being piccayunish.
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I have a better understanding of the characters since I wrote this. If I manage to pick it up again in the future there will probably be a revision to fix both writing style as well as these kinds of things.