A young Pinkamena Diane Pie escapes from the rock farm where she and her family live and work after discovering her special talent. Now knowing that she is destined to be a pony of laughter and happiness, she arrives in Ponyville to find herself. She is, reluctantly, taken in by her grandmother as the Pie family on the rock farm is set into panic over the missing Pinkamena Diane. Bitter and angry over their own sister's escape, how she could just abandon them after teaching them how to laugh, Blinkie and Inkie plan their revenge.
UPDATE: Changed one of the categories from "Slice of Life" to "Adventure". Seems more fitting.
Wow, it's difficult to write a description without revealing the whole plot.
I'd love constructive criticism; what I did right, what I've done wrong, and anything else you'd like to share.
I was the first to like it. I claim this right now and forever! This was really good, maybe know I can finally figure out the rest of Blinkie's name. (That would be a good idea to put in the story). Otherwise keep writing!
2130667 I'm so glad you like it so far!
I like that idea, I might add that in a chapter or two when she makes an appearance.
And then there was a favorite, a follow, a like and a comment.
2161547 And a sincere thank you from the author.
I see you changed to using spaces between paragraphs in the latter chapters. Good idea as it helps with reading the chapters. I would encourage you to add indentations where appropriate such as at the start of a paragraph. This will also enhance the reading experience.
2283296 Thank you very much for the feedback; I'll definitely take your advice on indentations for the next chapter. When I get the time, I think I'll also reformat the previous chapters the same way.
Wow. What a wonderful story. I enjoyed it, truly I did. I can not wait continue and read future chapters. ^_^
2290539 Thank you very much!
2292194 You are very much welcome
I like this very much! Pleeeeeaaaase continue