In Which Musical Protection is Met
Yayifications! Optimization Sneaky Sneaky was successfulness! Now I can explore the whole city all by myself, ‘cause I’m a big girl! Now, where to asplore first? Everything’s so sparkly that I don’t- Shiny thing! Gorragettheshinything!
If you would say that the young Eevee is easily distracted, you would be right. You would also be smacked upside your silly head for not having noticed sooner, as well as for stating the obvious without a license to do so. As everyone knows, only Captains are allowed to state the obvious. Anyone with a rank of first lieutenant or lower are not allowed to state such things under penalty of kp duty. Or so I’m told. I mean, it’s not like I’ve ever been in the army or anything.
Brah, just stick with narrating stuff, okay? You’re going to confuse people with your rambling otherwise.
Ah. Right you are, Brian. Sorry.
Ahem. Regardless, Kaye was now free from the confines of the train, and set about her task of exploring the crystal village eagerly.
Um, hate to interrupt, but it’s an Empire city, not a village.
Well you might know that, and I might know that, but does Kaye know that? No, she does not. She thinks that it’s a village, so that’s what I called it!
But you shouldn’t misinform everyone like that! That’s just-
Brian, would you just shut up and let me tell the story my way?! Go on, git! You’re wasting time with your interjections! Go away! No one likes you! You smell funny.
What?! Tauros-shit! I just showered!
Yeah, so? Doesn’t stop you from thinking that tacos smells like gyros!
But it does!
I’m just going to ignore him. Sorry about that. Where was I? Ah, yes. The shiny thing.
Well, as it just so happens, the ‘shiny thing’ was, in fact, a tiara. A tiara that happened to be sitting upon a pink alicorn’s mane.
Now, the alicorn did not notice Kaye’s approach, as she had, in her *ahem* “Operation Sneaky Sneaky”, managed to walk in a semi-circle, leading her back to the train station.
The adorable ball of fluff streaked towards her goal, leaving a silver line behind her as she rapidly approached her goal. She leaped majestically, eyes growing wider in joy as her tiny paws stretched out before her to grasp her prize.
Or, she would have, if Aunt Loony weren’t a meanie-head.
“Aha! We should have kept a closer eye on thee, little one. Our apologies, niece Cadance. Kaye is, what is the term? Hyper-energetic?”
“Hyper-active,” Blueblood answered, smiling reflexively at Cadance’s reaction of shock as Luna levitated the young Eevee mere inches from Cadance’s muzzle.
“Nuuuu! Shiny thing! Gotta get the shiny thing!” Kaye cried out, flailing her limbs as quickly as she could. “Lemme go lemme go lemme go lemme go lemme go! Shy-knee-thing!”
“No! Bad girl!” Wisp said sharply, twisting the tip of Kaye’s ear. “You do not just take things that belong to other ponies, regardless of how shiny they are or not! If you want shiny things, then you ask for them, alright? It’s mean to take things from other ponies! You aren’t a meanie-head, are you?”
“B-but, but, but, but-” Kaye argued, using her vastly superior intellect to submit the older pony to her superiority!
“Ah-ah-ah,” Wisp tsked, shaking her hoof at the floating kit. “Don’t you ‘but’ me, missy, or you won’t get any dessert tonight!”
Kaye’s heart broke. Her eyes watered at the injustice of the situation. She sniffed to hold back the tears, because big girls didn’t cry when others are meanie-heads to them. Right? Crystal didn’t cry ever, so neither should she! “O-okie doki,” she mumbled, her entire body sagging in the levitation field.
“Hey, hey hey hey,” Wisp soothed, slowly lifting Kaye from the levitation into her own grasp, hugging the Eevee. “I’m not trying to be a meanie, Kaye, but you need to learn some restraint. Now go apologize to Princess Cadance.”
Kaye merely curled up instead, however, hiding her face in her fluffy tail. It just wasn’t fair! She wasn’t trying to misbehave! She just-
“I j-just wanted to see w-why it sparkled m-mighty pretty,” she mumbled, hiccupping.
“How old is she?” Princess Cadance asked Luna, her mouth barely moving as she walked towards the Eevee with creeping hoofsteps.
“She is but a little filly of six.”
“Six-and-a-half, thank you very much,” Wisp snorted dismissively, nuzzling Kaye.
“Ah. Yes. Miss Wisp is correct. Kaye is a six-and-a-half year old orphan, sorry,” Luna corrected herself, nodding.
Cadance’s eyes widened ever so slightly.
“Twily! Thanks for coming, sis!” Shining Armour said, hugging his little sister.
“Oof! N-no problem, BBBFF!” Twilight replied, her smile faltering for a second as the leg around her withers grew too tight. “I needed a break from my research anyway. We’ve hit a dead-end from where we were experimenting. There just doesn’t seem to be a way to make a universal translation spell for us to speak their language when they all have a different number of syllables. And then-”
“Perhaps we should retire to the castle, where there’s tea available, hmm?” Blueblood suggested, glancing to the horizon.
“I quite agree,” Rarity added, tucking her scarf a little tighter around her withers, making sure her hat was settled firmly on her mane. “Nothing like a hot cup of tea to help you feel settled after a long ride. Now, who is this, if you don’t mind my inquiry?”
Shining Armour turned to the equine next to him, who was currently on fire. “Ah, right. Well, this is the great Barbleclof, the speaker for his nation to other nations. Barbleclof, this is Lady Rarity, Prince Blueblood, and Princess Twilight.”
“Po-ponyta-nyta?” it asked, tilting its head to the side as it pointed a hoof between Twilight and Blueblood, both of whom broke out into blushes.
“N-no! No, of course not!” Blueblood said, face dark red. When the others looked at him, he clarified, “N-not that we aren’t friends, or that I would object to, I mean, we’re not-”
“W-we’re just friends,” Twilight interjected, coughing into her hoof. “Best friends, granted, but- yeah.”
“R-right. That,” Blueblood agreed, nodding.
Rarity sighed and glanced at Shining, hoping to catch his eye. While he didn’t look her way, there was something about his expression that told her he knew about the situation, though she had no way of knowing what he thought about the matter without talking to him about it. She made a mental note to take him aside later.
“Regardless, I… Fluffy? Why… Bwa?” Twilight asked, staring dumbly at the Flareon.
Fluffy and Crystal were walking next to each other towards them, with Discord floating above them on a purple cloud, sipping juice from a crystal. While the first most noticeable change to Fluffy was the claw marks on his muzzle, with a couple pieces of ice attached, if you looked at his flank as he limped, Everypony could see a curly, purple signature, namely of-
“Discord! Why are you signing- No! Stop it! Do I need to get Fluttershy?” Twilight exclaimed, narrowing her eyes towards the floating draconequus.
“Why, are you referring to little ol’ me?” said draconequus asked innocently, halo and wings appearing on him. “Do not be so quick to judge, friend Twilight! For your information, Fluff-butt over there asked for it. Quite literally, too, I might add.”
Twilight’s mouth dropped, looking to Fluffy for confirmation, but they were headed directly for Kaye, who was being picked up by Princess Cadance.
“Oh, you poor thing! How can that be when you’re so adorable? I… A’mour? Come here!”
Shining Armour looked at the others, raising an eyebrow before trotting to his wife. “Yes, Love?”
Cadance steeled herself, before looking her husband in the eye to say, “I want to adopt her.”
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Okay, I lied. I'm looking at this, and I already figured out one reaction, so I'll see where it goes from there. Hope you enjoy the update, short at is it. I hope to keep writing more often, so next update should be in a week or two tops! Thanks once again for your patience everypony!
"unique spin on it"
So, the pokemon become humans?
5132576 XD No, no... I meant more like with the plot. What caused it, how people react to it, etc.
The main thing I saw in other stories is that others never really took as much of a psychological approach to how you would react if you actually DID travel to another world, turned into another creature. Even with what I did, I probably could have done better, sure, but...
Anyway. If you give this story a shot, then great! If you don't, then thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment regardless!
Less Brian, more drama!
...she wants to adopt Kaye?
Well, it was nice knowing the Crystal Empire! Everypony pack up and go home, there's not going to be much to see here.
5132633 One of the stories I'm currently writing does go a bit into that sort of thing (a genetic experiment who's MOSTLY gotten over the fact that they are no longer human) so I'll check this story out, might give me some more ideas...
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOOLOLOLOLLLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLL ITS ALIVE!!!!!!!
5132944 Less drama, more Brian!
5147964
We have different opinions!
5149638 5147964
I have... no words, honestly. I never imagined I'd have people arguing whether or not Brian is talking too much or not! XD
For some reason that seems like a very Cadence thing to do,
5151283 Yeah, unfortunately... It was COMPLETELY unplanned/unexpected, but then Luna opened her mouth in true-to-form blunt fashion, and right as I was writing it, I was like
*jaw drop* ... PLUCKING HAIL! *Rages off*
So yeah. Next chapter is going insanely slowly, as I have to figure out how everyone responds to this while being in character. Ugh... Stupid pretty pink pony princess of love derailing what little plot this story has anymore!
I like this so far
5154727 Awesome! Any particular reason(s) why?
Because Fluffy, also I named a Flareon Fluffy on Pokemon X
Cadance is going to adopt Kaye? THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER!
I just love the idea of our princess of love being a mother. I can really see her adopting a little cute girl like Kaye. Though, the Crystal ponies are going to be in for a storm of chaos with their new princess.
As much as i love Kay, i am happy that it wasn´t Fluffy that adopted her, i think that maybe would make it difficult to concentrate on Fluffy, if you know what i mean. I think Kay would get to much attention.