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Read this first:Darkire's history

Darkfire has become a pegasus pony because of a weird flower not even Zecora seems to know about. Fast-forward four years. Darkfire has married Rainbow Dash and had a kid, Shadow Zap. He now goes by the name Darkwing. However, something is about to happen that will change his life. That thing is himself.
Note: will contain spoilers of my next story, the prequel to this. It will be called Darkfire Universe: Arrival, the first in an ongoing series. This is the second book.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 29 )

Oh boy, be prepared for a myriad of different people stopping by to leave their thoughts on this fic.
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lol, I am trying to get some better authors and a few reviewers to check this fic out. I should tell SonicMario that the Doctor is in it!

There are the authors,, the editors, the reviewers, and the trolls. Just ignore those damn trolls, they don't know what they're talking about. I like this one, though it is kinda rushed. :pinkiehappy: I blame doctor WHOOVES for the alicorn and you. The TARDIS just grants him too much power, lol

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Well, I'll admit, I am... well, for lack of a better phrase, winging it.
Hay, Chase, y'all almost done in there? Ah need to post these new reaction videos soon!
That was one of our two new crew members. He goes by the name of Blaze online, and the other goes by the name Sick TV2!
Anyways, see you guys!

2165673 HAHAHA!! Winging it from a pegasus! That's just plain punny! :rainbowlaugh:

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Yeah, i wasnt going to use it, but I literally couldn't think of anything else to say.
SickTv2- Also, check out my bud JWittz's Pokemon themed profile on Youtube if you get the chance. He is the best bud f mine.

2165726 Allright, ill give it a look.

Pretty good, although a little rushed.

What does Shadow Zap look like?

What does their house look like?

You do need to describe these things. It makes the reader feel like they are in the story.

Other than that, good Chapter. I'll take a look at the second one soon.

Um, seems rushed and slightly forced. You need detail, describe the world around the protagonist, how they feel.

Is the darkfire universe all your idea? Cause I feel like this is missing major details. For example the history behind him and how he got where he is.

Ok, What!?

This is something you should proably tell me before I start reading. Who/what this story is based on, although now I will read this story no differently.

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good point. I will add a link to the blog and the description tells of a prequel.

Rushed rushed rushed, but so addicting! Hehehe, I wish I could teleport to another dimension with me in it! One where the other me is a girl and then I could date myself... :pinkiehappy:

It's like reding a summary of a REALLY good book...but just a summary. If only it could be filled out! :applecry:

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If you want a history on Darkfire to know more, read the link I posted in the description.
It is a repost of an old blog I had deleted

Next Chapter: The Aftermath.
This will detail how the four ponies related to the three dead characters react to the news, as well as revealing Destructo's list of powers!

Okay...Big Mac with Fluttershy I can see. But OC-Rarity? Named...Lucky?! I'm confused. :rainbowhuh:

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Lucky Clove is a background pony with the same body and manestyle of Time Turner/Dr. Whooves, and a four leaf clover as a cuite mark. He and Caramel pull the carriage to the Gala in 'The Best Night Ever'.

I am still confused. There must be another story that explains darkwing/fire's beginning and his relationship with the mane 6.

Please tell me this is suppose to be a continuation of another story.

Well this answers some questions, but now there are many more.

Well more questions one I will ask and I will also point out a plot hole.

Who died that pinkie was married to?
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Destructo flew to the forest yet the group followed his hoof prints.

Waaaaaaay too short.

I think after losing two, I think two is right, of their friends that they would be more emotionally distraut and not "cheer". This just ruins the non-existent mood and makes it seem like every this is just fine.

Well now I see the " read this first". Yaah, I will get around to it bun I have alot of stuff I do on this site. And it being low priority behind school and Cadets.

2211207 Caramel was Pinkie's husband
Everyone knows the Everfree Forest is dense, so I didnt think id need to explain that he landed.

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Actually, the prequel will explain all of that.

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You can still fly over/ through it.

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Yes but, there are still too many questions that are to be asked at this current time. The story is confusing right now and needs a lot of clarification. I could create a list of the questions if you like.

2218811Yes please. Also, Darkfire has his own account on here: darkfirehero
Look him up to ask questions.

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Well if you wrote the comics and the story, what role does he play? And I think I will let him get settled before I ask anything. He just made an account.

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Darkfirehero is one of my childhood friends. He was the person who came up with Darkfire in the first place. He also got me into being a brony. There is a list of the Darkfire Universe stories that will be released on his profile. I am making a list of characters that are not canon that shall appear in my story as well.

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