Sorry guys.
I know it says complete, but I couldn't focus on the next
story until I got this out of my head. I hope you like it.
This is the effects of one too many a can o' Guinness, known as the Ruby Gold.
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SEQUELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
2198788 Now I've gotten that out of my system, I can focus on it. I don't know when it will be up, but I'll do my best.
2198799 YYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When you make your sequal make sure you post a link here in till then........oh and nep..
2198876 *Sequel.
Sorry Had To.
2199102 no no thank ya i just went with what my phone said and didn't bother to look so once more thank ye.
Reactions To Different Portions Of The Story,Awww Yeah:
This Is An Epic Song For An Epic Story.
Jet Steak And Hammer Legstrong Grew Up So Fast.
I'm Happy For All The Characters Here.
Not Sure If I Should Be Happy About Lucky,But I Think He Is Happy Thinking That He Saved His Friends From A Deadly Force.
Also.Can You Suggest A Good Time-Waster(Any Kind) Song.If It's Fine With You.
Thank You For Making This Story.My Favorite One As Of Now.All The Characters Details And Dialogues Were Entertaining To Read.The Changelings,The Mane/Main 6,Lucky(My Favorite Character),The OC's Suggested By The Viewers,The History Of Some Relationships,And The Time You Spend Writing While In The Army(Are You In The Army?Or A Part Of The Army?I Don't Know Sorry).(IKnow Some Soldiers Are Also Writing Stories,But I Found You First So.YAY WIN FOR ME).
My (Non-)Official Ratings.(If You Would Like Ratings.If You Do Not,I Am Sorry And Ignore This Part)
Story - 10/10
Entertainment - 9.8/10
ETC. - Ranging From 7.5/10 To 10/10
Good Job Mate.Good Job.
Just Like What Spongebob Sang:
It's The Best Day EVER!
Best Day Ever.
IT'S THE BEST DAY EVER!
Best Day Ever.
2199135 ALGEBRAIC!!(My Friend Forced Me To Watch Adventure Time,Good Show That Was,Then That Word Stuck To My Mind)
2199243
2199283 Hahahahahahahaha
Huehuehuehuehuehuehuehuehuehueheuheuheuhue
Awesome, a credit roll with the theme song used in Borderlands 2. Oh, and know what I found out? Apparently, in the armed forces, captain is pretty low compared to the rest of the ranks. So what does that say about the equestrian military?
Still, awesome credit roll. Though next time I recommend a darker color for the text. There were times when I had to squint really hard to see the names.
2199615Retracting the statement about captain being low. The way my dad said it made me think it was low on the chain of command. It's not. My bad.
*sigh* Stars playing borderlands 2....
Thanks Lucky, For putting my OC in a AWESOME Story... me and Starfyre thanks you.
BORDERLANDS START THEME :D
EPIIIIICCCC
this aint no place for no hero~
this aint no place for a better ma-an~
this aint no place for no hero~
so go ho-ome~
2199231 Thank you for the review, it's much appreciated for my first story. By the way, I'm in the Royal Air Force.
2199615 I've actually had this discussion before, and whilst Captain is fairly low on the Commisioned Officer structure (3rd),
'Captain of the Guard' is the one in charge. It's just a title, not an actual rank. It think of them as being around a 3 star General level.
For example, Colonel Feather should be able to order Captain Gale around, but she is aa Captain of the Guard, she tells him what to do.
2199756>>2201200 I was going to use the one from Borderlands, but I had this playing in my car on the way back from shift, and
that's when I had the idea.
Awesome story. Especially when you got pissed off your head and ended up having a three way with the princesses.
Oh, may I also suggest 'Ain't No Rest For The Wicked' for the credits music? In the sequel. Because these were awesome chapters.
2201402 Ah, but did that really happen? Was I actually drinking? Well.....I was off the medicine....but maybe we drank to much and fell asleep instead......
That's the plan, I was going to use it here but I thought Short Change Hero was a better choice for this one.
2201361 Have You Met The Queen?(Um,If You Can't Answer That's Okay)
2201482 No I have not. I've met Princess Anne. She's awesome.
2199275 By the way, what did you mean by 'Now I get it'?
2201698 That's A Riddle You Have To Figure Out Mate.(I Figured Out That Someone Was Very Lucky At The Ending Part).Huehuehuehuehue.
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emiT rouY roF ouY knahT
.gnoS ololorT ehT oT gninetsiL m'I esuaceB s'tI lleW,seoD tI fI
2192945 Pinkie Pie, Obviously.
she'd just choose a random computer to pop out of, and then come back when it's safe.
Also, I'll just wallow in sadness now.
2206159 May I ask why you are wallowing in sadness?
2206325 HE'S DEAD, JIM!
2212130 Read the last line of Chapter 28 again.
2212377 I am an idiot.
2212431 No you're not. Sometimes we just miss things. Hell, I'm still finding things in Halo 3 that I didn't know about!!