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Lyra and Bon Bon are in love. They have been in love for quite some time, but they have not told anyone.

Tonight they're spending some quality time together, sipping tea and enjoying the beautiful sunset. It seems that nothing could go wrong.

But they're unaware of the things happening behind their backs.

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Comments ( 14 )

Oh boy, it's yet another Hearts And Hooves Day. I'd complain about being alone again, but as it's quite usual for one to be alone on Hearts and Hooves (at least from what I know) and as I don't really mind being alone, I'll save you from that this time.

But hey? What's this? A story? And it's incomplete? And it isn't sad yet? Who is responsible of this sorcery? I point a finger at myself (and also on a certain amazing musician, but more on that later) and my way to get ideas when I should be sleeping. But hey, who needs sleep when you can stay up and write?

And so, there I was, listening to some of Savant's absolutely awesome music when this got stuck in my brain. Things led to more things and soon I had the first chapter out of at least two done. And just in time for Hearts and Hooves!

But anyways, second one is going to change things. I'm not going to spoil much, but that [Sad]-tag is over there just for chapter two (like the Teen-rating).

And yes, I'm feeling better. Writing, meditation and Savant (plus some reading and Beethoven) do miracles :twilightsmile:

So far, this is just romance. I'm not a fan of the whole lovey-dovey stuff, I was writing a dark fic and wanted to post it today, but still have to finish it.
Anyway, I'm OK with romance, but I am expecting the sad to be sad.
However, I know you and I know you will not disappoint me. Just as I knew you would be less sad. I'm glad to hear that you are feeling better.

So, you have at least one more person awaiting more.
:pinkiehappy:

Also, that is a cool song. :twilightsmile:

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I'm not sure if it is going to be the saddest sad I have ever written, but it should be at least medium-grade sad with a side order of my take on segregation or something like that. And the romance? Just something cheesy for Valentine's day. Writing was my valentine, and I wouldn't have changed it even if I could have. It also serves the plot rather well, but that's just a plus.

And I guess I found a thing that cheers me up a little more. Bruce Willis shooting evil Russian guys. Yes, A Good Day To Die Hard was a great movie :twilightsmile:

Well, I better get writing, can't let the audience down, even if it's not quite as big as I imagined.

And oh, conspiracy theory. It took about 0 minutes for this one to get the first dislike (yes, I stalk my stories and their process of getting views and likes after being published). Someone hates me really much :derpytongue2:

This took longer than it was supposed to.

Now I'm going to have a little break from writing. I'll be visiting cousins this week and will be back on Friday or Saturday. I may visit the site every now and then, but I will not be writing. I need a break.

This has mistakes, is rushed and doesn't have the sad I was hoping for. Plus, I was too lazy to properly check the grammar and so on. Sorry about that.

Up next: I have no idea. I'll maybe even let you people decide. If I let you decide, I'll tell more later.

Now I have a horrifying headache, so long for now.

Whyyyyy??
Loved the story; short and sweet, but my heart broke a little at the end :(
Fav and +1 thumb for a good story, but so help you if you write another pony-killing story, i will strike thee where thy stands!
also; preqrel?

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Sorry about that. Seriously, sorry about it. But for what depression does to me, I have no power of changing into something happier.

I shall be waiting. That's a considerable threat, I must let my brains think about it for the week of peace.

And the idea of a prequel is quite good, I will add that to the list of possible stories to do next.

Sorry about the possible mistakes in those sentences, I just woke up and can't think while I type :twilightsheepish:

Thank you for the Fav, for the +1 and for your comment :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Ginger Pony deleted Feb 26th, 2013

YAY!
Erm, I mean Wah?
Nope, I like it when ponies die.
Yup, I'm 120% sane. :pinkiecrazy:


Anyway, I really like this one. Loved the ending, defiantly earned the sad. I really seem to enjoy the deaths of ponies. I seem to like writing them too, since half of my stories are either about a pony dying or they are already dead.
Meh, you need the people like us to balance out all the happy.
There is one mistake that is really bugging me, so I just have to point it out.

a weapon in their hands

Ponies have no hands. Hooves, or mouths, or magical grips might be better.

I'm sorry to hear that you will not be writing for a while, especially because I have many half-finished plans right now. I am glad you will still be on the site because I need some help thinking up a title for a story I have in mind.
(Psst. You. The one reading this even though it is not your comment. Yeah, I know who you are. Click this and help me out. You know you want to.)

Anyway, I liked this, well deserved the like I gave it right away. I am always waiting for more from you, but I know how to wait.

Hope to see more from you soon!
:pinkiehappy:

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Sanity is a nice thing, but sometimes you need to mix in a bit (or a lot)(or a truckload) of insanity to find the true joys of life :pinkiecrazy:

You're not the only one. When I try to do something other than sad or dark, it might take me days to get one line straight. I'll tell you a little secret. Chapter one was done in two hours, planning, writing, correcting, posting it here and waiting all included. My brains did the thinking and I moved my hands and BOOM! Chapter done. I had similar experiences with The Tale of the Slenderman and The Fall.

Yeah, my creativity will melt if there is only happiness around me. Been there done that, sincerely the time between Love isn't Easy and The Final Symphony...

Oh boy, I got off easy here. But that's only good. A single mistake in a chapter I wrote while other eye closed and 75% of my brains already drifted to sleep (or coma). But on the other hoof, that mistake is bad enough for someone to come knocking on my door and kindly remind me of the basics of pony anatomy.

But anyways, consider it fixed!

Yeah, I kinda needed a break. I'll rather keep a week off (and have extremely hard time to keep Word closed) than end up looking for my lost inspiration and creativity for months. But, because of sheer boredom, I will be helping people if people need help.

I saw that blog post of yours yesterday, before I went to bed, but I couldn't come up with a good name. I'll be thinking and I'll be sure to tell you if I come up with something :twilightsmile:

You'll be seeing more after the week. I may not be writing, but these damned ideas won't leave me alone. At this rate, I'll have about ten of them by Friday and that's when I will have to decide which one to write. And as I mentioned before, maybe you people will have a part in that decision.

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That was absolutely adorable!
Lyra and Bon Bon are such a cute couple, I love it.
Great job, and keep it up. :twilightsmile:

Fuck... Happy over... Pardon me while I cry now... :fluttercry:

Great job though, you're an amazing writer, even if it does always put me on the verge of tears...

Looking forward to more of your work when you're all better.

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I don't feel like doing a 1,000-word response right now, so I'm just going to say a simple "thank you". I'll also make this one as short as I can as I'm still pretty down. Sorry for that.

And also sorry for not answering your other comments and your PM. As I mentioned, I'm still down to the ground.

So, thank you for these kind words. Somewhere deep down inside me there is that little spark of optimism that keeps on telling me that there will be more. It's currently nothing but a small voice trying to shout over the echo of depression, but it's still there and as long as it lives and continues to try, there is hope.

I'll see you again in an hour, in a day, in a week, in a month, who knows? During that time I'll try to sort my life out...

Thanks for keeping me alive.

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Hey man, I'll- WE'LL always be there for you. Just take it easy, we'll be here when you get back. And feel free to talk to me if you need anything.

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