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Written as my response to the SALT prompt of the same name, it follows our now officially named friend on his journey to claim the throne. How wonderful~

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

“I ran out of toilet paperherher.”

2121920 Just don't ask me how it works when he lives underwater. I can't even grab some right after I step out of the shower.:applejackconfused:

2122002
Ugh, don't you just HATE when that happens?
But in all seriousness, this was great! =)

this sad part is, original stuff doesent get featured anymore,the only way to get a story is to to have 1000 followers and continue a series/ mimic an already done idea ,a 2nd person romance, or an antrho clop.

2122290 Woo hoo! I have written an doomed original story!:pinkiehappy:

This, was, FABULOUS. :raritystarry:

2122319 I feel ya. My new story "Toboggan" got like, 30 hits before it was flushed out by other new stories:fluttercry:

Absolutely genius! I'm glad to see this character was expanded upon--I mean, it's a shameful crime he is not. :raritydespair:

The responding gesture from the buck-toothed critter did little to soothe his umbridge.

"Umbridge" is actually spelled "umbrage".

“I’m going shopping!”

pgbrk
Where would the best shopping be?

I don't think that page break worked out.

That is, until one of those friends manages to find something suitably gaudy enough to trump it.

Should probably be past tense.

2875 bits later

missing a comma: "2,875"

”As I eliminate you one by one, please exit the stage graciously. The last one remaining on that stage will be crowned by me, personally,” Hoity said. Another measure of dignified applause followed his comments.

I'm reading all this in his round snobbish voice :raritydespair:

It should be known that, despite being seated already, every mare in the audience fainted upon a different lavish couch, most of which still had the price tags attached for some reason.

:rainbowlaugh:

Well that was an... interesting read...

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