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The Geoverse57 stories ·360 members

Buckingham Asylum

Buckingham Asylum was abandoned many years ago, and now four ponies want to search it. Who knows what it might contain?

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totallynotabrony

totallynotabrony #1 · Feb 13th, 2013 · · ·

Urban exploration is rad. I've never tried it stoned, though.

Okay, the story! You're going too fast. The details are good, but it's over practically before it began. The key to good horror is building suspence enough to let the reader's mind take over. Your spelling and grammer are good.

Metta