This is my first story so constructive criticism is appreciated. Also, if there is already a story named TES VI: Equestria, please let me know because i'll change the title if I need to.
Okiedokielokie lets get this started..............Equestria is at war with her neighbors Great Griffon and Draconia, to add to the crisis, portals to some far off dimension have begun opening up around Equestria, the falmares are coming out from the undergound, the draconequus siblings have awakened, and to top it all off, the Dragonborn has returned. This certainly means troubled times indeed for the once peaceful land of ponies.
Chapters (3)
I'm 90% sure there already is a story called TES VI: Equestria, but I'll have to read later when I have the time.
That was very well written and very exciting. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please let there be a next chapter.
ok then never mind!! hehehehehehe. (Face Hoof self)
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170574 Nuh uh...We haven't ponified Goku, or Naruto. We also haven't Ponified Cj or Niko(GTA) 1That would be Hilarious!
lolz yah your right! Though were kinda getting off topic here,
oh well lets party!!
EPIC!!
o hai guise...well i'm debating whether or not to continue this story soo...yea tell me if i should or not
i say keep going it's got my intrest cant wait for more
235870 I would be extremely interested in the continuation of this story!
And, uh, do you need a second editor, or a co-author of some kind to ensure the furtherance of the tale? I would be happy to help, and may be of some use, though timezones may work against us...