Scott and Mateo have always looked after each other. They are sitting at home one day watching TV when a loud bang is heard outside. When they go to investigate, strange things start happening. In Equestria, everything is fine until a similar bang is heard. The citizens of Ponyville are in distress as a multi-colored vortex appears. One thing is on everyone's mind....What is going to happen? (Little bit of blood, nothin like gore though)
A/N: This was a story from Mateo, so you may or may not see the names again, as he is the original guy who brought me in the herd. That, and he is a very close friend.
Chapters (6)
The story works, trust me I like the plot.
But you need to make some grammar changes to the description, cause you need to present it well for people to read it. 
164470 Looking back on it I did make some mistakes, thanks man.
but all in all its a very good story considering i know them both in real life- Shade
Chapter five is shorter than I want it to be, but I hope you all enjoyed the story.
I have like 4 chapters to read now
Why must everyone make chapters every other day? jk I'll read them tomorrow or tonight.
Interesting so far, I will read more.
172849 Glad you're liking it. Was fairly easy to write
wow....i never cried before.....until that time i got stabbbed but ANYWAY,
you made the uncrieable person cry...you must be a god/goddess
173142 Glad you liked it. The sequel is going to have a bit more action, as soon as I master the art of combat writing