Princess Celestia inquires about Twilight's love life, and naturally, she assumes it's an important assignment. Insult to injury, Spike makes a bet with Twilight that she takes in a moment of injured pride. Now, with the help of her friends, Twilight is out to find love - or at the very least a date for Hearts and Hooves day!
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2109739 Well, it's also got a few other mistakes that I missed (wrote this while sleepy.) That aside, I guess I could fix that later - my only problem is some of these sentences and whatnot are so short it almost feels silly to segment it all up... ah well, literary rules.
There's another reason why no pony asked Twilight to be her coltfriend/marefriend.
Wibbly-wobbly, timey-wimey stuff.
Oh, man, I be she dropped Braeburn like a bad habit! NOBODY gets between Pinkie Pie and her parties!
This story is funny and kind-hearten.
Really Princess Celestia really.
Trollesta
strikes again
I was hoping Spike would end up asking Rarity out
But I did enjoy the ending, and, most importantly, Spike won the bet!
Wow. I loved this story, especially the Twilight/Big Mac steath ship at the end with AJ just flabbergasted.
Hmmm whys he trying to hide himself usually the doctors more openabout this stuff
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Yeah, I know, but I thought 'what the hey' - I kinda wanted to beat around the bush with the concept and foolishly wrote this chapter while sleepy. I might go back at some point, not sure.
That's why you don't use so much hard dialect. The structure of the sentence can suggest the accent just as easily. Throw in a few southernisms now and again and it works fine.
Huh. Twilight and Flam really DO have more in common than they'd think.
I ****ING KNEW IT!!
You can't have a story about setting somepony up without a Big Mac chapter.
I mean, it would have been pretty weird for Rarity to consider Flam before Mac. UNLESS you were saving him for the conclusion.
Ask Rarity. She probably has video evidence of the deed.