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Seems interesting enough, just hope that it won't be another Tyrantia fic... if the second chapter is as good and enticing, i'll track this
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It started out as me just venting some steam after a pinkamena read session. So, I really don't know what to make of this.
also, Tyrantia?
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Tyrant Celestia, one of my pet peeves, sorry if I offended you in any way by mentioning it, also, whatever you do, it can't be really bad, after a prologue like this.
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no offense taken, I only asked because I was confused.
Way to lay the blame on me if anything goes wrong! oh well, the community hates me anyway.
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sorry about that.
I was thinking of going back to my method of just ocding the crap out of my chapters.
edit: why do they hate you?
so its cupcakes with Twilight instead of Pinkie and senseless killing instead of cupcakes... intriguing
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not really. there is point to the killings, but I haven't gotten to it.
edit: plus it doesn't help that writing grimdarks isn't my special talent.
2466974 there's no harm in trying something new, and i'm interested enough that I see no reason you shouldn't see it through
Pretty good - I would say it needs more chapters (duh) but it needs to be spread out a bit more - it's a little bit difficult to read!
There was some candy on your hoof
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I'll try to spread it out a bit, by adding more details to it. would that help it out?