Breakfast in Bed

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TheAzureAzoth

TheAzureAzoth #1 · Feb 10th, 2013 · · ·

Damn bon-bon looks either to be suffering from bed head from hell or one bitchin hang over

TheAzureAzoth

TheAzureAzoth #2 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

Now having read the story. I will say I rather enjoyed it. The clop is tasteful without being overly drawn out. I liked the pace of the story, I loved Lyra's reaction to hearing those three little words. The acts of Lyra's past you placed into the story and that those three words can do so much good and so much damage is made clear in the story.

In short, great work

magicoddeffect

magicoddeffect #3 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

Meh.

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #4 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

Very sexy.

SweetMelody

SweetMelody #5 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

It was a meh story, just add a bit more details and there's kind of a wall of text so make some more paragraphs. But I enjoyed it.m
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville

Syvvak

Syvvak #6 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

she had, in fact, once had an orgasm merely from watching Lyra have an orgasm, an extremely interesting experience she had only had once.

That line made me think of 'I Get Off' by Halestorm

I thought it was pretty good. Now, for you to continue Shipwrecked... please.

ShadowBrony

ShadowBrony #7 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

That was good. Not the best but I did like how you threw some humur in as well.

MuffinOverlord

MuffinOverlord #8 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · 1 ·

Good story, really. I'm going to say that it is an overdone ship and some of it is entirely cheesy and perhaps a bit too cheery, but those are minor complaints. The only real problem with it is the text walls.
Dividing it into paragraphs would make it easier on the eyes.

lunashy11