During Rainbow Dash's more boisterous years, being cool was the ultimate thing for her. Speeding through the clouds, being part of the Wonderbolts, and being totally un-lame was her teenage dream. But she's grown up now, and while everypony is fufilling their dream, she feels like being the sportiest pegasus isn't her destiny anymore.
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so... is this the end?
it says complete...
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OH SHIZZ MAH BAD
Sorry about that D: I'll change it right away, there is heaaaaps more to come!
I think I have an idea of what her new special talent could be. Something like what we all know sweetie belles is going to be for.
I dunno how i feel about Dashie being a pop musician. if anything, i get the grunge rock/punk/nu-metal feel. I've always seen her as leading Van Haylen, (pun intended).
But, stranger things have happened.
old way I could think --> only way I could think
lightning bold --> lightning bolt
couldn't of --> couldn't've (could not have)
droan --> drone
mean't --> meant
knook and crannie ---> nook and cranny
The story has potential, but I'm reserving my vote for now.
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I know I haven't scoured it for grammatical errors, so there will be some, and I don't plan on the final edit until its all done. Thank you for pointing them out though, for I'll come back later and pluck them out.
Why havnt I commented on this yet?
oh well, this is a great story I just came to post this song
[youtube=bAdWBBOIYm0]
Two updates in one day I'm impressed
[youtube=PQZhN65vq9E]
In my eyes if Sweetie Belle found a place like that to perform she would have her cutie mark.
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Dayum I don't know what possessed me to call her an Earth Pony xD
When their signing write it like this
"this is the end,
hold you breath and count to 10
Feel the Earth move and then
Hear my heart burst again!
"For this is the end
I've drowned and dreamt this moment
So overdue I owe them
Swept away I'm stolen
"Let the Skyfall
When it crumbles
We will stand tall and face it all
Together
"Let the Skyfall
When it crumbles
We will stand tall and face it all
Together"
[youtube=DeumyOzKqgI]
(I couldn't think of better example plus the video has the lyrics
)
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Sorry, I don't write their singing like that. I write it like they are speaking, because they are, just with a melody.
It's easier to read like that Hugh plus it makes them seem like their singing to me. Other wise it just looks like their speaking
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Thing is, they are speaking. Sorry, but I'm not changing it. I state when they are singing, I'm not going to split their dialogue into paragraphs.
This is just how I write that.
Eh it's ok
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Well, the story is complete now
Oh and something a Noticed that has happened throughout the story
PonyVille it's Ponyville
This was amazing!
This was definitely an interesting story.
However, something feels off about it in a way that I can't add it to my favorites.